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Message par DragonGirl » 10 Juil 2012, 06:30

Re: Interdimensional Travel

So Yeah this was my first fanfic I will be editing this so it makes more sense with the way my fanfics are going now.

Also Sara's first earth and Virtual forms. they're almost as old as this fanfic but enjoy.

Earth (ignore the necklace If I remember correctly that doesn't come into play until the sequel and that will probably change too so just ignore it for now.)
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Lyoko. (Her tail is a dragon's tail now but other than that everything is pretty much the same also the stupid expression I drew onto her face that was not intentional so Ignore that too)
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Message par DragonGirl » 27 Aoû 2007, 00:00

Fan Fiction a écrit:I could fast read everything, I love your text, this really definitely ecrit would need that you post more of Fan Invention

Traduction en Français: J'ai pu rapidement tout lire,j'adore ton texte,ces vraiment bien ecrit faudrait que tu poste plus de Fan Fiction!


Thank you very much. I have finished this story but I posted the sequal InterDimensional Catastrophy. It's nice to hear exactally what people think of the story. I would like to know things I could use to improve the stories I have not finished typing yet. if anyone has any advice I would love to hear it.

Now here's the badly translated french virsion of what I typed in english (sorry I'm snot good with french yet sofat all I can understand with out a translator website is Non, Oui, Désolé, Bonjour, Bonsoir, and Salut) Maintenant voici virsion français mal traduit de que j'ai tapé l'anglais

Merci beaucoup. J'ai fini cette histoire mais j'ai posté Catastrophy Interdimensionnel sequal. Il est agréable d'entendre exactally que gens pensent à l'histoire. Je voudrais savoir des choses que je pourrais utiliser pour améliorer les histoires que je n'ai pas finies de taper encore. si quelqu'un a un conseil j'aimerais l'entendre.

Message par Invité » 26 Aoû 2007, 22:23

I could fast read everything, I love your text, this really definitely ecrit would need that you post more of Fan Invention

Traduction en Français: J'ai pu rapidement tout lire,j'adore ton texte,ces vraiment bien ecrit faudrait que tu poste plus de Fan Fiction!

Message par DragonGirl » 23 Aoû 2007, 02:53

Chapter 25 the Untold Legend Starts Again

They all go back to school. This is what happens in Sara, Amanda, and Aelita’s dorm.

Sara: Hey There’s something weird going on!

Amanda and Aelita: Like what?

Sara: That box over there. (points at a midnight-blue ceramic box that’s sitting on a bookshelf.) Normally it doesn’t give off any magical signature but now-

Amanda: well then open it.

Glim: Ga goo!

Aelita and Atilea: Yeah.

Sara: Ok (she opens the box and there’s a clear, round magical crystal wit h a smooth surface) what’s this? (Picks up the crystal)

Athena: (whispers to self) The Crystal of Dimensions.

Sara: What did you say Athena.

Athena: I unfortunately can’t tell you but I’ll ask the Pixie Elders a bout it tomorrow!

Meanwhile somewhere above the city Darkar had just come out of a portal.

Darkar: This place seems easy to destroy at least there are no fairies, pixies or witches here to mess up my plans.

Xana: Sais you!!!

Darkar: Who the heck are you, and what’s that supposed to mean?

Xana I’ll tell you all about it if you team up with me.

Darkar: Deal!

The End
For now!!!

Message par DragonGirl » 23 Aoû 2007, 02:52

Chapter 24 Odd’s starter Pokemon?

Ok so Sara Decides to show every one her Pokemon she is telling them what pokemon are when Odd’s dog Kiwi runs out of nowhere and crashes in to Sara’s Electrike. Also a lot of characters don’t talk in this chapter but they are there.

Electrike: Elec? Elec electrike? (Hua? Hey what gives?)

Kiwi: Bark! (This!)(spits fire at Electrike)

Electrike: Elec (falls down but gets back up again) Elec elec (starts charging electricity)

Sara: (Holds out a Pokeball) Electrike return!!! (electrike goes inside the pokeball)

Odd: What just happened?

Sara: I don’t know but apparently Kiwi can spit fire.

Everyone else that’s human: This is confusing!

Blaze: Blaziken! (Seriously!)

Jolteon: Jolt jolt! (weird!)

Sapphire: Neigh (Creepy!)

Salamince: Roar! (I’m board!)

Riri: Ri ria. (Hits Kiwi on the head with her tail turning him in to a Growlith)

Kiwi: GROWL! Growl gorwl growllliiitthhh!!! (OW! Hey no fair!!!)

Sara: Whoa! Odd your dog is really a pokemon! Well maybe half Pokemon.

Odd: Well what do I do.

Sara: Here (hands Odd a Pokéball) I’ll show you how to use that later.

Odd: Good because you have some things to explain!!!!

Sara: like what?

Odd: That Dragon Thing!!!!!!!!!

Sara: Oh that well ok First of all when my eyes glow it has nothing to do with my fairy half.

Odd: What do you mean?

Sara: My eyes only glow if someone makes me really mad or if my dragon instinct kicks in.

Odd: and what a bout you being able to completely turn in to a dragon!!!

Sara: you know about that too!!! That’s something that I can’t explain to you yet sorry.

Message par DragonGirl » 23 Aoû 2007, 02:46

Chapter 23 Bonded Pixies

Everyone is in the woods (note the mewmews and Tecna went back to their dimensions) this is what happens.

Melissa: Is this going to take very long?

Livy: I hope not.

Melissa: Oh Livy I have something for you.

Livy: Really?

Melissa: Yes.... Here! (gives Livy a pixie sized light saber the exact same color as her light saber pail blue)

Livy: I........ I get a light saber!!!

Melissa: Yep!

Livy: Cool!!!

Glim: Goo ga ga ag goo!! (you 2 are weird!)

Athena: Dose any one know what Glim just said?

Everyone except Amanda and Glim: No

Amanda: I do!

Glim: Goo ga goo goo ga ag oog!! (Shut up Athena!)

Athena and The Pixie of Pranks: Shut up Glim!

Amanda: Don’t you tell Glim to shut up you 2 shut up!

Sara: and Odd: Don’t you tell our pixies t shut up!!!

Pixie of Knowledge: I’m confused. I’m never confused!

Pixie of Wisdom: Same here!

Jeremy and Aelita: Us too.

Ulrich: I don’t care!


Pixie of Attitude: Me ether!

Sara and Athena: Shut up you dorks!!

Urick and the Pixie of Attitude: Make us!!!

Odd and the Pixie of Pranks: Make us make you!!!!

Yumi and the Pixie of Telekinesis: This is really lame!

Pixie of Knowledge: All of you shut up you’re giving me a headache!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Every one else: ...........................................

Pixie of Knowledge: Wow that actually worked!

Pixie of Wisdom: At least every one stopped arguing.

5 minutes later.

Sara: Ok now that’s done....................How am I going to say this...... all of you have pixies.

Jeremy: What in the world are you talking about!!!

Odd: for some one who’s supposed to be a genus you an idiot when it comes to magic.

Jeremy: Shut up!

Odd: No

Jeremy and the pixie of Knowledge: Just shut up!

Sara: see Einstine I told you. you have a pixie.

Athena: Yeah so just name it already so we can move on!

Jeremy: Fine. (turns to the Pixie of Knowledge) Your name is Tyler.

Tyler: Ummm cool.

Sara: Ok some one else name their pixie.

Aelita: I’ll name mine! (Turns to the Pixie of Wisdom) I think your name should be Atilea.

Atilea: Yay.

4 minutes later.

Odd: (talking to the Pixie of Pranks) your name should be Rani un-less I can think of some thing better which I can’t right now.

Rani: You better think of some thing that isn’t as dorky!!!! (And that doesn’t sound Like a girl Disney “fairy’s” name)

Pixie of Attitude: The person you’re bonded to is really lame! (a rock falls on his head) Ow!

Sara: Ok came some one name the 2 remaining pixies now because I’m really getting annoyed!

Yumi: Fine! (Turns to the Pixie of Telekinesis) Your name is going to Lourana.

Lourana: Ok cool!

1 hour later!

Sara: Ok you loser (points at Ulrich) You are going to name your pixie now!!!!!!!

Ulrich: Fine! (Turns to the pixie pf attitude) Your name is going to be Mitch.

Mitch: Whatever

Message par DragonGirl » 23 Aoû 2007, 02:44

Chapter 22 A New Fairy

Ok what happens next is to confusing for me to under stand completely. All I know is that Xana shows up(or rather comes out of hiding(This is before he was hiding in the internet so he’s some strange cloud thing), the cynaclons panic and fly away wetting themselves in the process, Sara and Odd get thrown against some trees, Zoey ends up in a tree, Estelle, Bridget, and Corina end up tied to a tree, Kikki ends up face first on the ground, Amanda is out cold, Melissa is trying to get her light saber out of the ground, and Ulrich is hiding under Jeremy’s bed. Ok this is what happens next.

Xana: Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! I wonder who I should Attack next.

Ok Xana ends up attacking Jeremy but that’s a bad idea because it makes Aelita very very mad, so mad that she starts glowing then is surrounded by a bright pink light. When the light disappears she is in fairy form which is really hard for me to describe all I can say a bout it is that it’s completely pink even the wings are pink.

Aelita: (looks down at outfit and notices that she isn’t even on the ground)(What the? Wait I can use this to my advantage I just need to find out how to attack.)(Flies up higher) Leave Jeremy alone Xana.

Xana: (turns around) I’m confused.

Aelita: Good!!! (blasts Xana with an attack Similar to one of Tecna’s attacks)

Xana: Oooooowwww!

Jeremy: (Whoa!)

Aelita: Serves you right you dork.

Xana: What’s a dork?

Aelita: You are!!!!( Prepares to blast Xana again)

Xana: Oh crud! (Gets blasted by Aelita) Owwwwwwwwww! (Floats away)

Aelita: (flies over to Jeremy) Are you ok?

Jeremy: Yes.... but how did you do that?

Aelita: I....don’t know.

Meanwhile at ground level.

Melissa: Stupid Cynaclons got my light saber stuck!!!

Odd: No duh miss points out the obvious!

Melissa: Shut up stupid head!

Sara: That’s something I would expect from Darkar the loser who got destroyed by the Winx Club, and sucks at insults.

Odd: So what do we do now?

Sara: I have it covered.

Corina: Before you do anything else I suggest you un-tie us!!!

Sara: Shut up Corina! (Pulls out her inter dimensional communicator and presses a strange button)

Meanwhile at the factory Tecna’s cell phone starts beeping.

Digit: Is that the signal?

Tecna: I think so. (Types some thing on the keyboard of the 3 screened computer and presses enter launching a Return to the past)

Message par DragonGirl » 23 Aoû 2007, 02:34

Chapter 21 Cynaclons Part 7
Mewmews to the Rescue!

All I can say is that the cynaclons are arguing again and have been for the last 10 minutes. Oh and Ulrich is hiding behind Jeremy.(I think he’s finally lost it)

Tarb: I’m not taking that guy’s spirit!

Dren: Well I did it last time!

Sardon: Do I have to do everything around here?

Odd: (blasts Sardon) Will you 3 cynaclons just shut up!!!

Dren and Tarb: No.

Sardon: Humans are weak and useless.

Xana: (No duh!)

Sardon: This is taking too long (Start trying to take Odd’s spirit)

Predicite: Bark bark bark!!! (spits fire at Dren)

Tarb: Bad Predicite sit!

Predicite: Bark Woof!

Odd: (Blasts Sardon {again}) Take that you lousy cynaclon!!!!

Sardon: OOOOWWWW! (Pulls out some weird thing that I can’t think of how to describe) This isn’t worth it. (Prepares to attack)

(Picture of Sardon and part of the object I can't discribe)http://p-images.veoh.com/image.out?imageId=media-e164139HPwdx3zH1164315415Med.jpg&version=4

The mewmews show up.

Sara: Hey Cynaclons leave my friend alone or else!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dran and tarb: Not this again.

Sardon: Don’t worry I’ll take care of that dragon girl.

Sara: That’s dragonfairy to you cynaclon!

Sardon: ARIAL TEMPEST!!!! (Uses the weird thing to make a bolt of lightning hit Sara)

Sara: Thanks for the power boost stupid!!!..........MYSTIC ELECTRICITY!!!! (Launches an electric blast that not only hits Dren and Tarb but also hits Xana)

Tarb: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Dren: (sarcastically) Nice one Sardon.

The fight goes on with Mewmews attacking cynaclons, Sara and Odd Blasting cynaclons, the predicite spiting fire at Dren, Xana ocoasionly trying to help the cynaclons using lightning, but making things worse, Jeremy standing in his dorm completely confused, and Ulrich hiding behind Jeremy. Ok the Cynaclons finally end up close to winning when Amanda and Melissa show up in fairy form. Oh and Aelita shows up too but she has absolutely no idea what’s going on. Also Melissa is holding her light saber.

Amanda and Melissa: Backup has arrived.

Sara: Finally you two distract the cynaclons We’ll take care of the predicite.

Amanda and Melissa: Right! (They do what Sara told them to)

Sara: Breath Ability Bracelet!!!!!! (a circular object appears in front of her and she grabs it) Dragon Breath spiral!!!!!!!!!!!(Launches a twisting blast of fire, ice water and electricity at the predicite)

Corina uses her attack.

Bridget: Combat castanets!!!!!! (green castanets with pink bows on them appear in her hands) Deep Sea Serge Attack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(launches a watery blast at the predicite)

Kikki: Golden Tambourine Attack!!!! (a gold colored tambourine appears in front of her. she grabs it) Tambourine Trench (Sorry I don’t know how to describe Kikki’s attack)

Estelle uses her attack.

Zoey: Rose Bell Full Power!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Some strange light changes the predicite back to normal)

Kiwi: Bark bark! (Wags tail)

Odd: (Cool Kiwi’s back to normal!!!)

All Cynaclons: Oh grate Our plan is ruined!

Dren: (is hit by Melissa’s light saber) OW

Melissa: Take that stupid Cynaclon.

Tarb: Give me that! (Grabs Melissa’s light saber and get’s it stuck in the ground)

Melissa: Hey!!! That’s it! FROZEN MAGIC BLAST!!!!!!!!! (launches a ice covered blast at Tarb but misses and hits a tree)

Sara: Melissa your aim was off. I’ll handle it!. MYSTIC ELECTRICITY!!!!! (launches a powerful electric blast at the cynaclons but misses and hits Xana instead) Well at least I hit one enemy.

Message par DragonGirl » 23 Aoû 2007, 01:52

Chapter 20 Cynaclons part 6
The Second Attack

This Chapter starts in Jeremy’s room....... Oh right Odd walks in to the room. Also Xana is spying on them as usual.

Odd: Just so you 2 know I’m only sleeping in the same room as the both of you because Jim is making me I’d rather sleep in sector 5

Xana: (That can be arranged.)

Jeremy: Odd when are you going to get it through your head that Sara is working for Xana?

Xana: (Why would I have a weak little human work for me?)

Odd: Stop saying that! (Blasts Jeremy’s computer)

Jeremy: Hey!

Odd: Serves you right!

Xana: (That has to be tho only good thing that little pest has ever done.)

Ulrich: Odd Chill out will ya.

Odd: First you, your girlfriend, and Captain Computer Nerd vote to through Sara out of the group. Then Kiwi goes missing and I know you 2 had something to do with it.

Jeremy and Ulrich: No we didn’t!

Odd: Yes you did!

Jeremy and Ulrich: No we didn’t!

The Cynaclons Use a Predicite to crash through the wall.

Odd: And that explains what happened to Kiwi.

Meanwhile somewhere in the woods.

Sara: Ok I think I know where the cynaclons are, but I also think we should go Mewmew before we do anything else.

Zoey: Ok you lead the way.

Sara: Ummmmm ok............ POWER PENDENT!!!!!

All Mewmews: MEWTAMORPHOSIS!!!!!!!.

They all go in to Mewmew form.

Zoey: Mewmew stile mewmew grace mewmew power in your face.

Sara: Zoey do you not realize how stupid that sounds.

Corina: Can we hurry up I have shopping to do.

Bridget: Will people see us?

Sara: Most likely.

Zoey: What!

Sara: Don’t worry the won’t know any of this ever happened.

Kikki: What do you mean?

Sara: I can’t explain.

Estelle: We’ll need backup.

Sara: Don’t worry that’s taken care of. I even have backup for the backup. Now follow me. (Slowly flies away and the rest of the mewmews follow)

Message par DragonGirl » 23 Aoû 2007, 01:41

Chapter 19 Sara goes “home”


Once vacation ends The Lyoko Warriors meet Sara in the lab to get the explanation she owes them. Sara stands with her arms crossed. Odd sits on the floor holding Kiwi.
Yumi: Odd why’d you bring Kiwi with you.

Odd: I overheard Jim taking to Mrs. Hertz about a supprise dorm inspection. Lucky fur us right Kiwi?

Kiwi: Arf!

Jeremy: (shakes his head at Odd’s pun)

Ulrich: Well are you gonna say something or not?

Sara: I’m trying to figure out what you want me to explain first. There’s kind of a lot.

Aelita: Start with why you suddenly act like a completely different person sometimes.

Sara: (Sighs) That should be simple enough. So everyone who travels to other universes has a natural ability that awakens after the first time, regardless of magical ability. Usually it’s something small. This ability grows stronger with every dimension traveled to. Mine is that I’m a mimic. In difficult situations I can take on the personality or mannerisms of one of my parallels for a short time. Like when captain angst recognized me a week ago. I took on the behaviors of a parallel of mine named Alvin. Sometimes I just gain a power similar to that of one of my parallels and not the ability to copy them completely. Everything has its limits. You can gain other powers by traveling to other worlds too if you do it enough.

Jeremy: Just what do you mean when you say Parallel?

Sara: Oh right you guys wouldn’t know about that. So in every universe there is another you. They may not look like you or act exactly like you, the ones that do look like you will usually be extra different personality wise, but they are the you for that world. These other yous are called Parallels. The general rule seems to be two parallels per planet with no more than ten to one universe and no less than one per universe. For some reason all but two of my parallels so far have been men. (Sighs) It’s kind of weird. My only human friend back home had mostly parallels who are the same gender as her so I don’t understand exactly how it works.

Yumi: So there are hundreds of Odds all over the place that sounds unpleasant.

Ulrich: (laughs)

Odd: HEY!

Jeremy: I think that covers everything for now.

Everyone except Aelita looks at Jeremy with confusion.

Sara: Seriously cuz I have more things I could explain.

Jeremy: If you mean about how you’re not quite human we already know. Your DNA tells us that every time you go to Lyoko. Besides we saw you transform.

Sara: Well that’s not quite-

Aelita: Anyway Jeremy has great news.

Jeremy: I’ve found a way to use the scanners to send one of us to another universe. I think I can use it to send Sara home.

Sara: Wow already?

Odd: Aw.

Yumi: That was fast.

Jeremy: Well I worked on it all vacation.

Ulrich: Great. When were you thinking of sending her back?

Sara: Don’t talk about me like I’m not standing right here.

Aelita: We were thinking about right now.

Sara: You’re sure you’ve got the right dimension?

Jeremy: Positive.

Sara: (Rairai, Blaze, am I really going to see you soon?) Let’s get this over with then.

Sara goes down to the scanners and gets in one of them, while Jeremy inserts the disk containing the program into the supercomputer’s disk drive. Sara waits for the program to start. The scanner closes and Sara begins hovering in the tube. Back in the lab Jeremy is typing away on the keyboard. Aelita watching one of the three screens for him so he can focus, Odd, Ulrich, and Yumi watching over Jeremy’s shoulder.

Jeremy: Alright the final phase is starting.

Aelita: Everything’s stable

Jeremy: Perfect. Thirty seconds to dimensional transfer.

Yumi: What if something goes wrong.

Aelita: The worst that will happen is Sara will end up on Lyoko instead, if that happens we’ll just materialize her.

Jeremy: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, Execute! (presses enter)

All windows except the maps of Lyoko close and are replaced by a window with a green plus sign in a circle. Jeremy and Aelita high five.

Yumi: So what happens if you sent her to the wrong place?

Jeremy: My calculations aren’t wrong. I got her to the right dimension. She’ll be able to get back to her family for sure.

Yumi: Are we sure she even wants to see them?

Odd: Yeah from the sound of it her uncle is worse than all five of my sisters and Ulrich’s dad combined.

Jeremy: That does sound bad.

Ulrich: (Shakes his head) Nothing we can do now.

Yumi: anyway what makes you think you got it right?

Jeremy: I matched the energy frequency of her transformation to the universe she came from. There’s no way I’m wrong.

Odd: I bet you ten bucks you messed up.

Ulrich: I’ll go in on that too.

Jeremy: That is a bet you gentlemen will lose.

Yumi: (Rolls her eyes) Really guys really?

Jeremy: It’s not like you guys can do the math to prove me wrong.

Yumi: (shakes her head)

Odd: We don’t have to do math we can just call her. (Pulls out his phone and tries to call Sara’s pokegear)

Jeremy: She’s in another universe. There’s no way that’ll work.

Yumi: (Sighs) Come on Aelita, let’s go back to school before someone notices that we’re gone.

Sara appears in a different universe and is immediately in pain for a few seconds. when she regains her composure she finds herself standing in front of a large pale pink building the only man insight is a leprechaun who shapeshifts himself into a ferret. Sara facepalms.

Sara: Wow Jeremy was way off. At least I know where I am. (Scaly tail swishes like an agitated cat. She blinks and looks back at her tail then notices her clothes.) I look like I do on Lyoko. Why? Am I only here in virtual form? There’s only one way to find out for sure. Go provoke my Parallel in this world and her friends.

Sara wanders around inside the pink building, every group of girls she passes as she roams the halls whispers about her, mostly about her clothes. Sara ignores them and continues her search until a girl with very long blond hair exits a room and bumps into her.

???: Youch! Hey watch where you’re going.

Sara: You’re the one who didn’t look when you exited that room! (Low growl forms in throat)

???: Your outfit is hideous! You have to let me fix it.

Sara: Uh no. Not happening miss pushy.

???: Wait I know you! You’re that girl from a different dimension that got stuck here last year! What was your name again.

Sara: My name is Sara and if you try to touch my clothes I will hurt you. (Growls)

???: But your clothes are so disgusting! Who dressed you!

?????: Stella who are you insulting now? (exits the room)

Sara: (tail swishes)

Stella: Bloom you’re on my side right? Her outfit is horrible she has to let me dress her!

Bloom: Just leave her alone Stella. Remember what happened last time you tried to change her look.

Stella: But this is just so bad!

Bloom: (Shakes her head.) So Sara why are you here?

Sara: Uhhh. Virtual reality accident. I’m pretty sure I’m here in virtual form. Need help proving that. If I really am here in virtual form then I have to take enough damage to be devirtualized.

Bloom: We’ll go ask Techna she should be able to help.

Sara: Whatever just hurry up and get me out of here. (I hate being in this dimension.)

Sara follows Bloom and Stella into the room they came out of and to a room near the back with music booming through the doors.

??????: Musa do you have to have that so loud!

Musa: Sorry Techna.

The music grows quieter

Bloom: (opens the door) Hey Techna Sara here needs your help.

Techna: (Stands up from the chair she’s sitting in) Hummmm You’re here as a virtual being?

Sara: I think so but I’m not sure. If I am I need someone to attack me to send me back where I was.

Techna: (pulls a small device out or her pocket and points it at Sara) Hum. You’re definitely virtual. And you seem to already be at half health.

Sara: Someone attack me please.

Bloom: I’m sure we can find a better way.

Sara: You’re no help. I’d attack you to get myself back but I don’t want to accidently kill you.

Musa: That’s not a cool thing to say.

Sara: (Shakes her head.) I hate being in this universe so much. Maybe I can shoot myself in the foot a few times?

Aisha: (Punches Sara in the back of the head as hard as she can.) That’s for what you did last time you were here!

Sara devirtualizes.

Aisha: Woops. I didn’t mean to hit her that hard.

Sara steps out of the scanner into an empty factory.

Sara: Ugh I can’t believe that got me back. (Walks towards the elevator) I bet they all went back to class. They’ll find me next time there’s a Xana attack if I wait in the lab. I could call one of them but I only have Odd, and Aelita’s numbers it wouldn’t be a big deal if my pokegear could text. (sighs) I’m talking to myself out loud again.

Back at Kadic Jeremy and Aelita are standing next to the vending machine waiting for the others when Yumi walks up.

Aelita: Have you seen Odd or Ulrich anywhere.

Yumi: (Laughs) Aren’t they in your class.

Jeremy: We haven’t seen them since history.

Yumi: You sure Odd’s not in the cafeteria?

Jeremy: We already checked there. It’s weird for him to miss lunch like this.

William (happens to walk by)

Aelita: Hey William can you let us know If you see Odd or Ulrich anywhere.

William: Yeah sure. (Gives the group an unenthusiastic thumbs up and keeps walking)

Yumi: (once William is out of earshot) Do you think it’s Xana?

Jeremy: I wish I knew. Turns out sending Sara back where she came from bugged up the superscan. I launched the old scan but it’s going to take a little while longer.

Aelita: Maybe we’re worrying over nothing and they just went to check on Kiwi. If they’re not back before lunch ends then we should worry.

Sara steps out of the elevator into the lab to find Kiwi whimpering on the floor. she doesn’t notice him at first.

Sara: (the elevator was slower than normal)

Kiwi: (Sees Sara and sits up) Bad!

Sara: (Looks at Kiwi) Oh hey I forgot you’d be here.

Kiwi: Bad! Bad! BAD!

Sara: Why do you think I’m bad?

Kiwi: Bad! You took away my human!

Sara: Hold on what do you think I did to Odd?

Kiwi: You came and took away my human and spare human! You hurt them real bad first! Bad!

Sara: (shakes her head.) I really miss my Pokemon right now. Look Kiwi even without language barriers I’m still having trouble understanding you. I know you’re upset but please try to bark more clearly.

Kiwi: (growls) You are bad! (sniffs the air) Wah? (walks over to Sara and sniffs her) Oh! You’re not bad. Bad you smells very different.

Sara: I think I get what you’re trying to tell me. Do you know where Bad Me took Odd and… Uh your spare human? I can’t remember weather spare human meant Ulrich or Jeremy.

Kiwi: (tilts head) Spare human is spare human. Don’t know where they went but I can smell My Human.

Sara: Can you lead me to him?

Kiwi: (wags tail) Yes! You’re going to help?

Sara: (nods) We have to hurry.

Kiwi: The smell goes up first. (trots over to the elevator)

Odd wakes up chained to the underside of a metal table. He struggles against the chains.

Ulrich: Good you’re alive too.

Odd: (Stops squirming) Ulrich? Where are you?

Ulrich: Chained to the top of this table. Guess I could have it worse.

Odd: No kidding. Why would Sara lose it like that? So much for Jeremy sending her home. Maybe Xana possessed her?

Ulrich: Not really important right now.

Sara?: Your friends will come for you and then I can destroy you all at once. I can’t believe you thought I was ever on your side.

Odd: See that sounds more like something Xana would say.

Ulrich: Seriously Odd shut up!

Sara follows Kiwi to a row of warehouses. She hears Odd and Ulrich both scream.

Sara: Wait here Kiwi I’ll take it from here.

Kiwi: (Hides in a bush) Don’t have to tell me twice lizard.

Sara: (groans) I’m not a lizard. (What am I going to do though? I need to have the element of surprise. Whoever’s in there probably isn’t expecting me… unless Aras found this universe then she’s totally expecting me. Although If I was someone no one really expects… [Grabs a charm bracelet that hangs from her wrist just under her shirt.]) Mimicry.

Sara?: Hum. I was sure someone would be here by now.

A second Sara with black hair jumps down from the rafters.

????: Alright this time we end this for-…. wait you’re not the original… You’re not Sevey either? Who are you? Did they make more?

Odd: What the hell is going on all I can see is the floor.

Ulrich: I have no idea what I’m looking at right now.

Sara?: (eyes flash Xana’s emblem) Who are you again You seem like the forgettable sort.

????: I am Aras. And You are more phony than me. Never thought I’d be saying that one.

Red Headed boy?: (steps into the warehouse holding a metal pipe) Now don’t fight over me my darling hunnies. There’s enough of Zelos to go around. (Ugh I feel sick saying that. If I could have been someone else I would have.)

Aras: (Raises an eyebrow) Who are you?

Sara?: Stay out of this.

Zelos?: Hum… You must be the imposter the Real Sara asked me to take care of for her. (points at Sara?. Xana’s clone)

Sara?: (Kicks the table Odd and Ulrich are chained to onto its side.)

Aras: This isn’t my business. I’m out. (Disappears into the shadows.)

Ulrich: Great now I can’t see anything.

Odd: Are we sure the guy with long red hair isn’t a pretty lady.

Zelos?: I am insulted by that comment now do you want me to save you or are you zeros going to be a distraction. (Rushes the Xana-clone with the pipe only to phase through.) That’s how you want to play eh? Well have some of this. Lightning! (Calls down a bolt of lightning from nowhere on the clone who quickly recovers)

Sara?: (fights back grabbing Zelos?’s arm and throwing “him”).

Zelos?: (aerial recovers, lands, then swings the pipe close to the ground then straight up) Demon Fang!

Sara?: (steps around the energy that travels along the ground towards her.) Pathetic.

Zelos?: (runs towards the Xana-copy and swings pipe at it) Light sphere!

Odd: That attack contained neither of those things!

The Xana-clone takes Odd’s distraction as a chance to fling Zelos? against the ceiling. A silver bracelet falls off landing right in front of Odd. Zelos? turns back into Sara before hitting the ground.

Sara: Dang it. At least that confused Aras into leaving but dang it! (Stands up) Looks like that charade was a bust.

Xana-clone: (Surrounds herself with electricity and looks at Odd and Ulrich)

Sara: Oh no you don’t! (waits for the last second then jumps in front of the attack. While the clone recharges She breaks the chain holding her friends with her bear hands causing them both to fall) Time to go.

Ulrich: (gets up)

Odd: (Grabs the bracelet then gets up)

The three teenagers flee the warehouse Sara using herself as a shield for the others one more time on the way out.

Odd: That was close

Ulrich: Close and weird as heck! What was all that.

Sara: I told you guys I had more things to explain. By the way Jeremy got the wrong universe.

Ulrich: The others are probably worried about us lets go back to the factory.

Sara: So uh. Just a warning the black haired girl that called herself Aras she’s my clone and is actively trying to find and kill me. She’s not evil she just really hates me so she should leave you guys alone as long as you don’t get in her way. If she does attack just leave everything to me. She and I are equally matched so she usually runs away. (I’m better than she is though.)

Odd: How’d you find us.

Sara: Thank Kiwi.

Kiwi pops out of the bushes and the group hurries back to the factory talking along the way.

Ulrich: How’d you turn into that red head?

Sara: I can temporarily take the form of one of my parallels if I have a strong enough bond with them and if I have something that belongs or belonged to them. The red headed guy I took the form of is Zelos Wilder. The fact that I’m paralleled with him at all raises a lot of questions that I do not have the answers to.

Odd: I don’t think She’s following us anymore.

A blue light passes over the city.

Jeremy sits in the chair in the lab frowning. Everyone else is as they were right before They sent Sara "home".

Jeremy: I was sure it would work.

Sara: Well it didn’t. I was in virtual form so even If I did get back it would have been temporary and it was the wrong universe.

Ulrich: Looks like someone owes us ten bucks.

Odd: Each.

Jeremy: (Groans)

Yumi: (shakes her head)

Aelita: Well since we know you’ll end up in virtual form each time we can keep trying until we find the right dimension then work on getting you there permanently.

Sara: True but it sounds like Jeremy still owes Odd and Ulrich ten bucks.

Odd: Each.

Sara and Odd both start laughing.

Message par DragonGirl » 23 Aoû 2007, 01:35

Chapter 18 Rush to the Tower.


The Lyoko Warriors make their way to the sewer passage and rush to the factory. Jeremy hurriedly sends everyone to Lyoko’s mountain sector.

Jeremy: Who knows what’s happening back at school. We have to hurry.

Aelita: Which way is the Tower?

Jeremy: North. I’m sending the vehicles.

Meanwhile back at Kadic Sara is dodging Herve’s attacks gracefully flying around higher than he can hover.

Sara: Hey you have to fight what’s controlling you. It’s taking advantage of you!

Herve: (Shoots at Sara again)

Sara: (Dodges) Ok this isn’t working I’ll have to fight back after all. (Blocks the follow up attack) The problem is this form requires ranged combat… If I change to the form I usually fight in that will scare everyone. (Dodges another attack) hey cool it down there for a minute so I can think.

Herve: (reaches up and manages to grab one of Sara’s wings)

Sara: Crud.

Herve: (Pulls Sara out of the sky)

Sara: Now I’m mad.

Back on Lyoko Odd has stopped to stall some Krabs while Aelita and Ulrich go ahead to the tower.

Jeremy: The tower’s not much farther. Hurry who knows what’s going on back at school.

Ulrich: Any monsters?

Jeremy: Just a few kankrelats. And the Krabs Odd couldn’t finish off.

Aelita: He devirtualized already? Is that a new record?

Ulrich: No Jeremy holds that record.

Jeremy: Ha ha very funny… I’m worried about my dad. I’m gonna call and see what’s going on back at school.

Meanwhile back at school. Sara is using a barrier to keep Herve from getting to the gym while William and Jim peek through the door.

Sara: Will you two get inside! You’re making my job harder.

William: You sure you don’t need help?

Sara: Just shut up and get inside.

Herve: (trying to force his way through the magic wall)

Sara: You’re not getting through here! (Sara’s pokegear rings) Ugh really? I can’t answer that thing right now. It’s literally part of the fibers of this skirt.

When Sara’s Pokegear stops ringing William’s cell phone rings.

William: Why are you calling me?..... Your dad is fine. ……. She keeps saying she can handle it but she’s having a really hard time.

Sara: (Low growl forms in her throat) I am not you liar!

William: You are not! Some superhero you are.

Sara: Careful your angst is showing.

Herve shatters the magic wall and stomps towards Sara.

Sara: (facepalms) Crud. (She shoves Jim and William into the gym. She stands holding the door shut from the inside.) Is there another entrance?

Jim: Yeah. There’s one right over there. (points across the room.) And there’s one in the locker room.

Sara: Push something in front of those doors. I want there to be one entrance. It will be easier to stall for time. Beating sense into him isn’t going to work. (Hurry up guys)

Back at the factory Jeremy hangs up his phone and shakes his head.

Jeremy: Hey things aren’t going well at school.

Ulrich: We’re going as fast as we can! You’re lucky Odd told us about the megatank

Odd: You’re welcome!

Back at school Herve bursts through the side door. William is a little too close to the door. Herve immediately goes after him.
Sara flies across the room.

Sara: Idiot! You couldn’t have just stayed with Jeremy’s Dad like I told you!

Back on Lyoko Aelita enters the tower.

Back at Kadic Sara grabs Herve’s arm and pulls him away from William.

Back in the tower Aelita begins floating up the second level of the tower doing a back flip on the way up.

At school Herve turns around and grabs Sara’s neck.

In the tower Aelita lands on the platform and approaches the interface which appears in front of her.

At school Jim and William try to pull Herve off of Sara but can’t seem to. Herve tightens his grip on Sara’s neck.

Back in the tower Aelita places her hand on the interface.

Interface: AELITA. CODE. LYOKO_

At school Herve passes out. Jim rolls Herve off of Sara.

Sara: Ugh. (Stands up and rubs her throat) That could have gone better.

William: We have to restrain him till the police get here.

Sara: No need. The thing possessing him’s been calmed. That’s why I was just stalling for time and not really fighting.

Jim: Alright young lady you seem to know what happened here so start explaining.

Sara: Uh how about no. Hurries outside and flies away.

A wave of blue light passes over everything.

The day begins over again. This time Sara sneaks in to Kadic, and goes to talk to Aelita.

Aelita: So you’re not going to get Odd and Ulrich ungrounded this time?

Sara: No. It’s easier for Xana to take control of someone in a weakened emotional state. Ulrich is the main cause of that last attack. They’ll be fine in their room. They were playing videogames when I checked on them. Anyway even with whatever what’s-is-name did he still didn’t deserve to be treated that badly.

Aelita: It makes sense. But Xana won’t be able to act again for a while he has to regain his energy.

Sara: Shh

Aelita: What?

Sara: Someone is outside. The door.

Sara and Aelita listen as whoever was outside walks away.

Sara: Ok now it’s safe. Anyway you guys still need to make it up to what’s-is-name. He may have wronged all of you, mainly Yumi from the way it sounded, but it sounds like he just caved to peer pressure. He was feeling lonely and powerless trust me I know how that feels.

Aelita: Alright I’ll tell Jeremy and see what we can do.

Sara: I better get out of here before I get you in trouble.

Message par DragonGirl » 23 Aoû 2007, 01:23

Chapter 17 Transformation


Sara stares at the main building. Her spine tenses up for a few seconds. The rest of the group begins walking towards the park.

Sara: Something’s wrong.

Odd: (Looks back at Sara) What?

Sara: Something’s wrong. Or if it’s not it’s about to go very wrong.

Ulrich: (crosses his arms) What exactly is wrong?

Sara: I just felt an electrical disturbance from that direction. (points at a window in the main building) It only lasted a second but there was definitely something.

Aelita: Maybe you were just imagining it? After all you did have Xana invade your head not too long ago. What you felt could have been an after effect.

Sara: (Shakes her head) No. I want you to be right but if I don’t trust my instincts then things tend to go bad really fast.

Aelita: If Xana were doing something then Jeremy would have told us by now.

Sara: Alright. If you guys are sure then I’ll take your word for it. But I’m keeping my guard up.

Odd: So let’s go to the park.

The group starts heading for the park only to be stopped by Jeremy’s father.

Mr. Belpois: Have any of you seen Jeremy? I wanted to tell him I was leaving.

Odd, Ulrich, and Aelita all look at each other. Sara glances back at the main building.

Aelita: He told us he would be with you.

Mr. Belpois: I assumed he would be with all of you.

Ulrich: He did say he was going to put his stuff away first. He’s probably still in his dorm.

Mr. Belpois: Thank you. I thought he would have finished by now but apparently not. (Walks towards the dorms)

Sara: Still think my danger instinct flared over nothing?

Odd: You were right we were wrong. Best two out of three?

Aelita: Now isn’t the time for jokes Odd.

Ulrich: We’ll go check out the dorms. You girls keep an eye out down here.

Sara: You know we could go check the girl’s dorms while you check the boys right? (Crosses her arms)

Odd: Which floor was that disturbance you mentioned before on?

Sara: The second floor.

Ulrich: That’s the boys dorms now we don’t have to check the classrooms on the first floor or the girls dorms.

Odd: Someone’s got’a keep Jim busy. (Odd laughs heading for the main building)

Ulrich: Odd wait up. (hurries to catch up to Odd)

Sara: So now what?

Aelita: (Shrugs) Guess we’ll wait in the quad.

After ten minutes of waiting William begins pestering Sara and Aelita. This causes Sara to lose her patience and punch him in the stomach, which in turn starts a fight, which attracts Jim to them to break up the fight. Before Jim can actually make it across the quad, Sara and William’s fight is stopped by the sound of glass shattering. Everyone looks at the main building to see Jeremy, Odd and Ulrich helping Jeremy’s father climb out a window of one of the first floor classrooms.

Jim: What the heck?

Sara: (Squints as she stares into the room)

Herve floats almost a foot above the ground and shoots a bolt or electricity out the window.
Odd, Ulrich and Jeremy manage to duck in time. Jeremy’s father is not so lucky.

Jeremy: DAD!

Jim: Everything going crazy (Rushes over to help but Sara stops him.)

Sara: Don’t be stupid you need a distraction to get them out of there.

Jim: You stay out of the way.

William: Besides how the heck are we supposed to distract that! (Gestures to Herve)

Sara: By staying out of MY way. (Starts rubbing her hands together.)

Aelita: What are you doing?

Sara: (still rubbing her hands together) Just get to the “park” Aelita.

Jim: All you kids need to get somewhere safe.

Sara: Not happening. You should take Edgy mc jerkface to the gym. Stay away from anything metal especially if it’s sharp (Still rubbing her hands together)

William: What makes you think you’re in charge?

Sara: Because I can do this! (Moves her hands apart so that electricity arcs between them) And you can’t

Odd Ulrich and Jeremy manage to Drag Jeremy’s father over to the group.

Jim: How’d you-

Sara: (Resume’s rubbing her hands together) New plan Jim was it? You and Edgy take him with you, Odd, Ulrich and Jeremy you go to the “Park” with Aelita

William: Why can’t we go to the park? It sounds safer.

Herve by this time has come out the window and it already floating a cross the quad.

Sara: Because I say so and I’m the superhero here not you. You’re gonna want to stand back. (Separates her hands again causing electricity to arc between them she claps her hands above her head while this is still happening causing a blinding flash when the light fades she has large butterfly wings on her back covered in zigzagging patterns, her clothes have become a crop top and skirt that hands about an inch below her knees both colored in a mosaic of different shades of blue with a few purples mixed in both the top and skirt have zigzag fringe hanging from the hem. She’s also wearing semi transparent blue elbow length gloves, and purple cords wrapping around her calves and feet that apparently are supposed to serve as shoes, a simple gold circlet sits on her head, and a single blue streak cascades down her hair. The entire outfit and the wings sparkle garishly) Hua? When did this transformation get upgraded? I don’t remember meeting the conditions for Enchantix? Dang this outfit is skimpier than the old form.

Jeremy: What did she just-

William and Ulrich: What the heck?

Odd: (Stares at Sara)

Aelita: (Punches Odd)

Jim: (Takes Jeremy’s father supporting him on one shoulder)

Sara: (makes a magical wall between the group and Herve) I’ll take care of things here.

The Lyoko warriors all look at each other.

Jeremy: Alright but you owe us an explanation.

Sara: Of course. Now hurry.

Message par DragonGirl » 23 Aoû 2007, 01:20

Chapter 16 The Shunned


As vacation reaches its last week Aelita returns to the dorms leaving Sara alone at the Hermatage. Seeing no real point in staying at the Hermitage Sara goes back to sleeping at the factory. After finishing off the last of a boar she caught in the woods a week earlier Sara decides to ease her loneliness a bit and go visit the Lyoko warriors instead of waiting for them to come see her. She decided to take the sewers to the hermitage passageway instead of one of the secret passages inside Kadic then walk to the school’s front gate. Once Sara Arrives at the gate it isn’t long before Jim walks by.

Sara: (Waves as Jim) Excuse me sir!

Jim: Hua? (Looks over at Sara then walks over to the gate) What can I help you with young lady?

Sara: I’m a student at a school across town and I have some friends attending this school. I figured I’d come visit them before vacation ends.

Jim: What’s your name?

Sara: I’m Sara.

Jim: And who is it you want to see? They may not even be here since it is vacation after all. Most of Kadic’s students are home with their families.

Sara: There are three of them. Odd Della Robbia, Aelita Stones, and Ulrich Stern.

Jim: Yep all three of them are here. Stones is in the cafeteria eating breakfast. Stern and Della Robbia are confined to their room for the remainder of vacation.

Sara: (Oh yeah I do remember Aelita and Yumi both describing Odd as a troublemaker.) What did they do now? (I have to pretend I know them better than I actually do If this plan is going to work.)

Jim: They refused to eat breakfast or dinner yesterday!

Sara: …. (I know where this is going.) You were the chef for those meals I’m guessing?

Jim: Yes.

Sara: (Sighs) So you essentially grounded them because they bruised your pride.

Jim: When you put it that way it makes me sound mean.

Sara: Well it wasn’t so much mean as it was… how should I put this? Kind of… strict for the sake of being strict. And you’re just hurting yourself by doing it. (I don’t like doing this but I’ll have to be manipulative here.)

Jim: What do you mean?

Sara: Well think about it. This school is on break. You’re still here because there has to be an adult to take care of the students who didn’t go home for vacation and at this point the ones who came back a few days early. Well that and, this is just a guess but, you kind of live here and don’t have anywhere else to be.

Jim: (face turns red) Yeah well what’s your point?

Sara: You’re a teacher here right? Then this is your vacation too. Granted you’re the adult in charge but that doesn’t mean you should spend all your time in work mode. All you have to do is make sure the students are safe, come back on time if they go off campus, and don’t get into fights with each other. You still have plenty of time for yourself. Even with Odd being a goof.

Jim: Hey that actually makes sense.

Sara: Of course it does. (Sara tries not to roll her eyes [How stupid is this guy?])

Jim: Alright (opens the gate) come on in uh… I’m sorry what was your name again?

Sara: Sara. (That answers that question.)

Sara follows Jim to the cafeteria.

Jim: Alright I’ll have to go get Stern and Della Robbia. I can’t let a non-student in the dorms after all. Especially a female non-student in the boys dorms.

Sara: I understand not following that rule would freak some parents out.

Jim: (nods) Good. Stones should still be eating breakfast but, if she’s not then just check the library…. or the computer lab… wait you don’t know where those places are. Shoot uh. If you can’t find Stones just ask Dunbar or Pichon. They’ll be able to help you. (Walks away)

Sara: (sighs) Well I guess I should get this over with. (Aelita shouldn’t be too hard to spot with her pink hair.)

Aelita finishes her breakfast, the grainiest oatmeal anyone could imagine flavored with mud and sweat socks, and goes to put her tray away. As she moves to leave the cafeteria Sara walks in.

Aelita: H-HEY! (Hurries over to Sara) What are you doing here?

Sara: I came to visit you, Odd, and Ulrich. My school’s on vacation too after all.

Aelita: Oh right. (What kind of cover story did she make up?) Well Odd and Ulrich got grounded.

Sara: I convinced.. which teacher was it-? Uh Jim yeah I convinced Jim to let them off the hook

William: (Yells across the room) If you can manage something like that then where were you three days ago?!

Sara: At my own school. This conversation doesn’t concern you so shut up.

William: (hurriedly stands up) Wait a minute You’re that girl that was hiding in the bushes before vacation!

Sara: (Aw crap that guy!? Really! He couldn’t have gone home. Or at least forgotten me. I’ll just have to remain calm what would Alvin do in this situation?) Sorry kiddo it sounds like you’ve got me mixed up with someone else.

William: Uh. What? You don’t seriously think-

Sara: Better luck next time (Moves her shirt collar as if she was adjusting a scarf)

William: What the heck?

Aelita: We better be going. (Guides Sara out of the cafeteria once they’re a safe distance from William she mumbels) What the heck was that? Your entire demeanor changed.

Sara: I was behaving the way one of my parallels would act in that situation and I guess I over did it… again. Still not my best impression-

Aelita: What?

Sara: Oh right I haven’t explained that yet. I’d rather explain to everyone. It’s better then just telling you now and having everyone else be lost later.

???: Well Odd and Ulrich would be lost at least.

Sara and Aelita turn around to see Jeremy behind them holding a suitcase.

Aeltia: Jeremy? I thought you weren’t due back until tomorrow night?

Jeremy: I convinced my dad to bring me back early. We got here sooner than I thought we would. (looks at Sara) So why are you here?

Sara: I’m visiting isn’t it obvious?

Odd and Ulrich join the conversation.

Jeremy: I thought you two were grounded?

Ulrich: Jim had a change of heart or something.

Sara: You’re welcome.

Odd: What did you say to him.

Sara: I just reminded him that it’s his vacation too. So anyway what do you guys do around here when there’s no school?

Ulrich: A whole lot of nothing.

Odd: Video games. (glances around) If Xana gives us the time.

Jeremy: Some of us have more important things to do with our time Odd.

Sara: So there’s nothing to do around here? They don’t give you anything to do with down time? That sucks.

Aelita: apparently there have been some plans for a rec room but no one’s followed through with them.

Sara: Well that’s no fun.

Jeremy: (lowers his voice) I have to put my stuff away. I’ll meet you guys at the factory in about an hour. My dad’s still hanging around here somewhere so I’ll stay here until he leaves. Shouldn’t be too long but still we can’t be too careful.

The group nods and Jeremy walks away. Before they can do anything else Herve approaches them.

Herve: H-hey guys.

Ulrich: (rolls his eyes.) What do you want?

Herve: Well um… I was wondering if you guys wanted to hang out or something?

Odd and Ulrich look at each other. Aelita Shakes her head.

Aelita: No offense Herve but what You and Nicholas helped Sissy do the day before vacation just isn’t something we can forgive.

Herve: B-but that was Sissy’s idea.

Ulrich: And you went along with it. You almost got Yumi suspended!

Sara: (Scratches her head) I have no Idea what you’re talking about.

Odd: I’ll tell you the full story later.

Herve: I didn’t know what Sissy had planned!

Ulrich: There’s no way we would hang out with you. Just get lost.

Herve: (looks at His shoes and walks away.)

The group watches as Herve approaches William.

Sara: I kind of feel bad for that kid.

Odd: He’ll be fine.

Ulrich: We have to go to the factory soon anyway. We can’t risk him following us.

Sara: (watches as Herve is rejected by William and returns to the dormitory building) There may have been a better way to handle that.

Odd: (Tilts his head as he watches Sara.)

Ulrich: Well there wasn’t and it’s done.

Odd: (Is it me or did her eyes just go catish for a second?)

As Jeremy unlocks the door to his room Herve enters the hallway and calls out to him. Jeremy stops what he’s doing, rolls his eyes and turns to his classmate.

Jeremy: Yeah what?

Herve: I was wondering if you wanted to play a game of chess with me? Tournament rules?

Jeremy: Oh gee I’d love to Herve but I wanted to hang out with my Dad a little before he leaves.

Herve: Ah I see. How about later then?

Jeremy: (Ugh just leave me alone already.) Yeah maybe… No wait I already promised Aelita I’d hang out with her. Maybe tonight after dinner. If there’s still time.

Herve: (sighs) Yeah alright. See you later. (walks away)

Jeremy enters his room.

Herve returns to his dorm and sits down on his bed.

Herve: (Punches his pillow) Why does everyone hate me? Sissy keeps ignoring me. Stupid Ulrich. Thanks to Nicholas not staying for vacation I got stuck playing board games with Jim and that was just when William disappeared. After what I helped Sissy do there’s no way Odd or Aelita would hang out with me. Still I might have gotten them to accept an apology if it wasn’t for stupid Ulrich. Even Jeremy blew me off. Sure he offered to play chess with me after dinner but he probably just wanted to prove that he’s smarter than me again. Ugh. I HATE THEM ALL!!!

The lights in Herve’s room flicker.

Jeremy searches through the pile of disks he has dumped onto his bed. When he finds the first one he was looking for he shoves it into his backpack he does the same with the next two before he removes his laptop from his suitcase opens it and presses the power button. Nothing happens.

Jeremy: Dang it. I forgot to charge this thing. So stupid. I’ll have to fix that before I do anything else. (Sets the laptop down on his desk. then begins rummaging through his bag through his suitcase for the charger.) This is what I get for letting mom pack my stuff. At least I was able to get these disks in.

The doorknob to Jeremy’s room moves slightly.

Message par DragonGirl » 23 Aoû 2007, 01:10

Chapter 15 Bonding Part 4: Ulrich



Ulrich walks into the Hermitage around eleven at night. He had insisted on taking what would have been Odd’s third shift of watching Sara alone. He walks over to Aelita and taps her on the shoulder to let her know it’s time to go to bed. The pink haired girl nods and goes upstairs to her room.

Ulrich sits alone watching Sara for more than twenty minutes before he gets bored, pulls out a device that looks exactly like a game boy advanced SP, and begins playing Tetris.
Sara sits up and looks around. Ulrich pauses his game and looks over at her.

Ulrich: So you finally decided to wake up.

Sara: (Rubs her head) You are not who I expected to see.

Ulrich: (shrugs and unpauses his game) Sorry to disappoint you.

Sara: I’m not. Just suppressed. I assumed you wanted nothing to do with me.

Ulrich: (frowns and puts his game away) Let’s get something straight. I’m only here to protect my friends from you!

Sara: (nods) Makes sense. None of you know me everyone else is being reckless by trusting me too soon. Someone has to be careful.

Ulrich: (glares at Sara) You’re being way too understanding.

Sara: Which I’m guessing is making you more suspicious. The fact is that while getting back to my universe would be much easier if you guys helped me, I will eventually get back there by myself. I would like help but I’m not going to go out of my way to win your trust.

Ulrich: (I don’t want to trust her but she doesn’t seem to be lying… she hasn’t lied to us this whole time. She does keep leaving things out but she might have a good reason for that. The squirrel thing is proof enough that that’s possible. [shudders at the memory of the squirrel.] There’s only one thing I can do to really test how much we can trust her. But should I even bother? If she doesn’t deserve out trust then I’d just be wasting my time.)

Sara: (stands up and stretches) I slept for way to long. If you need me I’ll be on the roof. (exits the house)

Ulrich: (Who should I talk to about this? Not Yumi she’d be asleep plus she’s on vacation with her family. I’d rather not wake up Aelita. Awake or not Odd would be useless. Jeremy it is then [pulls out his phone and begins texting])

Sara sits on the roof of the Hermitage listening to the sounds of the woods surrounding her for a while before she hears someone exit the Hermitage. She looks down and sees Ulrich step off the porch and turn around.

Ulrich: (stares up at the roof) Um. Hey can you come down here?

Sara: (Moves closer to the edge of the roof.) Is there a reason why you can’t come up here?

Ulrich: Just hurry up will ya.

Sara: (Sighs and shakes her head) Alright (slides down the edge of the roof and lands on safely on the ground just behind Ulrich on one hand, one foot, and one knee)

Ulrich: Are you crazy? That building is three stories high (Points at the hermitage)

Sara: (Stands up) I know my limits. Besides you’re already suspicious of me (Spine tenses up) there’s no point in me hiding my abilities.

Ulrich: ([tilts his head] Did she just lie?)

Sara: So what do you need?

Ulrich: Fight me.

Sara: …What?

Ulrich: I want to test my strength against your magic.

Sara: No. I haven’t figured out how to control the strength of my magical attacks and I have never been able to use a healing spell successfully. I could end up accidentally killing you. If you want to fight then fine but I won’t use magic. I know I can hold back my physical skill.

Ulrich: (Wow she is really arrogant.[Takes a defensive stance]) We’ll see about that.

Sara braces herself for an attack but after a few minutes of nothing happening she smirks and turns to walk back to the house. At which point Ulrich finally makes his move attempting to punch Sara in the back of the head. Sara anticipated this and ducks just in time before quickly kicking Ulrich in the shin. Ulrich weather’s the attack and retaliates with a kick of his own. Sara dodges this with a bizarre spin. Sara seems to be left opened by that move which based on her reaction was supposed to deal some damage. Ulrich uses this to his advantage and manages to land a hit.

Sara: (Rubs her cheek) Decent shot. Not good enough though. (kicks Ulrich in the stomach then knocks his feet out from under him) Are you sure you want to keep going with this?

Ulrich: (stands up, picks up a stick, and starts wielding it like a sword) I’m just getting started.

Sara: (Sighs) I’m starting to get annoyed. This was fun at first but I could seriously hurt you if I’m not careful. Or something worse could happen and that doesn’t mean I would accidentally kill you. I have enough restraint to avoid that even by accident.

Ulrich: What could be worse than accidentally killing me!? (Strikes at Sara)

Sara: (catches the attack) I meant worse for me not you. The situation I was thinking of you’d be fine but I end up being hunted constantly. (Throws Ulrich to the side) Please I’m asking you to stop!

Ulrich: (Looks up at Sara) …So you are hiding things from us. (Stands up)

Sara: (Sighs) Keep attacking me if you want but I’m done. I won’t fight back but I won’t let myself be killed either.

Ulrich: (Tosses the stick away then brushes himself off) It sounds like the things you’re hiding are your own business. Something that put your life in danger before. I know what I need now.

Sara: (Growls) What do you know.

Ulrich: You’re only hiding things from us to protect yourself. We don’t need to know. It’s none of our business. (Turns towards the gate and waves over his shoulder) If Aelita asks I’m going back to school. Odd and I will come check on you girls tomorrow.

Sara: (Tilts her head) Thanks?

Ulrich: Just make sure to call us if… Drat I forgot Jeremy gave your weird phone thing to Odd to return to you. We’ll get that back to you tomorrow.

Sara: There’s no rush on that.

Ulrich: Have a nice night don’t do anything stupid. (leaves)

Message par DragonGirl » 23 Aoû 2007, 00:55

Ok I'm going to finish this story up today then post Interdimensional Catastrophy tomorow here is a compleat list of the stories in the order which they will be posted here.

    This Forum's order

    Interdimensional Travel*
    Interdimensional Catastrophe*(70 chapters long in like 50 something posts I don't know how yet but I will make this thing shorter even If I have to ask a mod or admin to delete the entire thread and start from scratch)*
    Code Lyoko meets Garage Kids *(At this time edits have been completed more in the future are unlikely however I'm not going to say there won't be more becuase I was a kid when I started this stuff and never thought I'd change anything in any of these stories but I was wrong about that.)*
    Code Lyoko Pure, and Mremaid Melody Quest for infinity
    Reverse Dimension Panic*(finished at this time But I will go make a few edits every once and a while)*
    Sara Returns *
    Anime Intrusion
    Time Travel Hassle
    Summer at Kadic
    Cross Dimensional Disaster*
    A New Beginning* (I may change the title of this one)


Wait no more between chapter entertainments?

You can do more in Interdimensional Catastrophe.

Yay!

Odd shut up!

He doesn't have to!

Go away so I can post the next chapter!

Edit: Pretty much all of these stories have been canceled. most of them because they were stupid ideas to begin with I just didn't know at the time I have placed an asterisk next to titles that will be edited, replaced with newer versions(this story included), or will still be made eventually but in a different form than what I originally intended... so better. The full list will remain so we can all laugh at the bad Ideas I had when I was younger.

Seriously though I really need to fix the problem with InterDimensional Catastrophe being too long In the rewrite that thing is going to be maybe thirty chapters If I can even stretch it that far. I think At last count there were 75 chapters or something and since I posted multiple chapters in one post a few times I think It came out to around 50 total posts of fanfiction that I now have to replace. I really Don't think I can do that unless I can delete some of those extra posts or outsource for filler chapters or something.

Message par DragonGirl » 22 Aoû 2007, 02:33

I forget If I've mentioned this or not yet but this fanfic takes place in a different timeline than the show and is counted as it's own separate universe. It does follow the same general time line up until the end of what would have been season 2 then the events start to diverge. Which is where this fanfic begins.

Message par DragonGirl » 21 Aoû 2007, 23:48

Chapter 14 Memories


Upon entering the Hermitage Sara sees the nurse that seems to work at every single Pokemon Center, who she assumes is actually Aelita, sitting over a pink laptop. Odd guides Sara over to the couch and helps her sit down so she doesn’t fall. Sara doesn’t really need Odd’s help with that but she lets him do so anyway. In Sara’s eyes Odd still looks like the boy with long red hair.

Sara: Thank you.

Odd: No problem. I wish Ulrich has stayed to help.

Sara: Actually he seems to be the most reasonable at the moment. You all don’t know me very well yet. For all you know I could be an enemy. I’ve managed to prove to the rest of you that I’m not but you all seemed to trust me a little too quickly.

Aelita: Actually Jeremy doesn’t really trust you either.

Sara: Well none of you should. At least until you’ve gotten to know me better. I’m honestly disturbed by how quickly you, Odd, and Yumi decided to trust me. I’m probably shooting myself in the foot by saying all this but seriously save your judgment of me until you actually get to know me. I don’t completely trust any of you yet.

Ulrich: (walks out of the kitchen he actually looks like himself to Sara this time)

Sara: (Is he really here? I could have sworn he said he was going back to school.)

Aelita: We can’t get to know you if we don’t give you a chance.

Odd: Yeah Ulrich is just being harsh because he’s still freaked about the squirrel thing.

Ulrich: Hey Odd I’d rather not relive that experience. Stop talking about it.

Odd: (laughs)

Aelita: Squirrel? Do I even want to know?

Odd: Probably not.
Ulrich: Don’t ask!

Aelita: Anyway Sara, I think Jeremy and I figured out a way for you to block Xana out of your head.

Sara: That’s great. I’m willing to try anything at this point.

Aelita: There was an activated tower last night. It only stayed active for a few seconds. Xana probably tried to take control of you at that time but for whatever reason couldn’t. Still because of this he’s managed to use the electrical frequency your body emits against you. That’s why you keep hearing him.

Sara: And why my vision is so messed up. I don’t care about the cause. How do I make it stop?

Aelita: The most likely scenario is that Xana manipulated one of your memories in his attempt to control you. If there was a way to fix it we could not only block Xana out but you could eavesdrop on him whenever you wanted.

Sara: After the stuff I’ve already heard no thanks.

Aelita: Unfortunately there’s no way for us to fix your memory. Only you can do that. And you’d have to be asleep to do so.

Sara: How do I know which one it is?

Aelita: It would have to be one that’s important to you.

Sara: Like the memories of my mentors.

Aelita: (nods) Yes.

Sara: Alright.

Xana: Foolish Humans. Your plans are futile. I cannot be stopped.

Sara: (lies down on the couch) Alright. I’m not going to wake up until this problem is solved. So only wake me up if you find out you’re wrong ok.

Odd: How can you just fall asleep like that?

Sara: Easy I haven’t had any decent sleep in a couple years.

Odd: Alright then.

Aelita: Do you need anything else before you do this?

Sara: It would make me feel better if someone would watch my back while I sleep but it’s not important. I know you all have stuff to do. (Closes her eyes)

Ulrich: (shrugs) I guess it wouldn’t hurt if one of us stayed behind to watch you.

Odd: (hurriedly raises his hand) I’ll take the first shift. You go back to school and relax.

Ulrich: No thanks I’d rather not get roped into playing board games with Jim and William.

Odd: (Chuckles) You could hang out with Herve.

Ulrich: (Crosses his arms.) That’s not funny Odd!

Aelita: Just hang out in your room and listen to music or something.

Sara manages to fall asleep after a couple minutes. She focuses on the memory of her mentors that she feels is most important. Finally she succeeds in immersing herself in her own past.

Sara looks around at the scene that’s beginning to surround her. A plateau in a forest overlooking a small village on one side and a bizarre military complex on the other. Kratos. The man with reddish brown hair and purple clothes from her earlier nightmare stands in front of her holding a sword by its sheath with the hilt pointed towards Sara.

Sara: Um. (Takes the sword form Kratos) What are we doing?

Kratos: It’s time to test your strength. Don’t worry I’ll go easy on you… unless you’d rather fight Mithos, or Yuan?

Sara: (Takes a second look around) No. This is wrong.

Kratos: Uh what?

Sara: This isn’t how this happened. We weren’t in the woods near Iselia. If we were you would have know that Lloyd was alive way sooner.

Kratos: (looks over the edge of the cliff at Iselia. He then places his right hand on his forehead under his bangs covering his right eye in the process) I suppose you’re right. So then where did this happen? Torrent forest?

Sara: No. I can’t remember the exact location but we were in some unnamed forest in northern Sylvarant. (the scene changes to a generic forest.) Also I wasn’t this old.

Kratos: (Nods) Right you couldn’t have been more than ten-

Sara: No still wrong. I was five at the time. (Blinks and finds herself being significantly shorter)

Kratos: Humm. If you were that young at the time there’s no way I would have let you use a real sword.

Sara: (Watches as the blade in her hand becomes a simple wooden sword) Now we’re getting somewhere.

Kratos: What were we doing here then? You were only five there’s no way I would be sparring with you.

Sara: Definitely not. I think you were trying to teach me some Arte. I can’t seem to remember which one. It wasn’t lightening I could do that one without actually casting the spell.

Kratos: It would have to be something basic like demon fang.

Sara: That was it. I think I fixed everything that Xana changed. Let’s reset this memory to the beginning and see if that did the trick.

Kratos: Not just yet.

Sara: What you’re just a manifestation of my subconscious what else could you have to tell me?

Kratos: Were Yuan and Mithos spying on us from the bushes?

Sara: Yuan was but Mithos was somewhere back in Derris Kharlan probably obsessing over what happened to his sister. No way to actually know.

Kratos: Ok that was the last thing.

Sara clears her mind and resets the scene back to the beginning this time with the changes she and her subconscious made. This time Kratos is kneeling in front of her so as to be closer to eye level holding a wooden sword by the blade towards her.

Kratos: You did great. This time let’s try not getting mad and throwing the sword.

5 Year Old Sara: Sorry (Takes the sword from Kratos)

Kratos: (stands up and walks over to a makeshift training dummy made of sticks.) Now let’s try this again.

5 Year Old Sara: (Moans) Alright. (Swings the sword straight up) Deeman fang!

Kratos: Ok. Your pronunciation is … better. (walks over to where the five year old memory version of Sara is standing picks her up and sets her down a few feet to the left) Your motions are still wrong. I’ll show you again. Pay attention this time. (Draws his sword)

5 Year Old Sara: (moans) Is it naptime yet? We’ve been doing this for days!

Kratos: It’s only been two hours.

5 Year Old Sara: (pouts)

Kratos: Demon Fang. (swings his sword so that the blade passes only couple centimeters above the ground then straight up a wave of energy begins moving along the ground halfway through his swing knocking down the training dummy) That’s what the motions for the Arte are supposed to look like. (Walks back over to the pile of sticks that used to be the makeshift training dummy and sets a couple of them back up) Now it’s your turn.

5 Year Old Sara: But I don’t wanna!

Kratos: We’ll be done with today’s training soon. After that it’s nap time.

5 Year Old Sara: (whines) Ok! (takes a deep breath) DEEMON FANG! (Tries using the arte again but her motions are too slow. A small puff of energy is produced and moves about a foot across the ground before it dissipates.)

Kratos: (nods) Very good. Try that again but make sure you’re moving a little faster.

5 Year Old Sara: (looks at the wooden sword in her hand for a good minute.) NO! (Throws the sword at Kratos but misses and hits the pile of sticks.)

The wooden sword bounces off the ground into the bushes just to the right of where the makeshift training dummy once stood.

????: OW!

Kratos: (throws a glance over his left shoulder and sighs) Just how long do you plan on sitting there Yuan?

5 Year Old Sara: (growls)

Kratos: (returns his attention to Sara) What’s wrong?

5 Year Old Sara: I’m tired! I don’t want to do this anymore!

Kratos: Come on now. You were doing so well. I know you can do this.

5 Year Old Sara: NO! I DON’T WANT TO USE A SWORD! YOUR SON IS GONE FOREVER! HE’S THE ONE YOU WANT TO DO THIS WITH! I CAN NOT BE HIM!

Kratos: (Face goes pale)

Yuan: (Stands up from his hiding spot in the bushes holding the wooden sword)

Sara: (Oh right now I remember why Yuan being here was important.)

Kratos: (Turns away and walks a few feet into the woods)

5 Year Old Sara: (Eyes grow wide)

The five year old version of Sara and Yuan both wait a few minutes without moving. When Kratos does not return five year old Sara stares at her shoes. Yuan sighs and walks into the clearing towards the little girl setting the wooden sword down on the ground along the way. He kneels down in front of her and pulls out a handkerchief.

Yuan: …. There’s no need to cry.

5 Year old Sara: I said something mean. Didn’t I.

Yuan: (Wipes Sara’s face) A little. Still Kratos needed to hear that. Be happy you didn’t say the wrong thing to Mythos. That kid has lost his mind.

5 Year Old Sara: Do you think I made Uncle Kratos cry?

Yuan: Probably.

5 Year Old Sara: (Eyes tear up more)

Yuan: Crud that was one of those moments where I was supposed to lie wasn’t it.

Sara: ([Smirks] Probably... But Now I’m glad you didn’t)

Yuan: Listen. Don’t worry too much about Kratos. Someone would have had to tell him sooner or later. Better he hears it from you; a parallel version of himself than someone like me. (Continues drying Sara’s face)

5 Year Old Sara: B-but.

Yuan: (Sighs) If it’s bugging you so much then go talk to him about it. It couldn’t make things worse.

5 Year Old Sara: (nods and moves to follow Kratos)

Yuan: Hold on. (Stands up) I can’t let you go alone. I’ll accompany you just until you find Kratos. Alright.

Sara fast forwards the memory to where her five year old self and Yuan find Kratos. The second they find him Yuan leaves really leaves instead of hiding like before. Five Year Old Sara walks over to Kratos, who’s sitting on a fallen tree, and pulls on his cape. Kratos tries to ignore her.

5 Year Old Sara: (Pulls on Kratos’s cape again) Uncle Kratos?

Kratos: (wipes his face on his wrist takes a deep breath then turns to the little girl) Yes?

5 Year Old Sara: I’m sorry I made you sad.

Kratos: (Picks up the five year old version of Sara and sits her down on his lap) It’s alright. I was pushing you too hard. You already know what happened right?

5 Year Old Sara: (nods) I don’t understand though.

Kratos: You’re too young. No one expects you to. The fact is that I failed to protect my own child. I keep going over it in my head. Then there’s the promise I made to your father. (Stares off into space) I couldn’t even protect my own family. How can I protect what’s left of his… I thought If I could give you a way to defend yourself. Then maybe your real uncle wouldn’t be as much of a problem…

5 Year Old Sara: But Uncle Kratos I can already do an Arte watch. (Points her finger at the ground a few feet away. LIGHTENING!

A sword made of electricity instantly strikes the ground where the small girl had just pointed discharging a bit of electricity into the surrounding area.

Kratos: (Chuckels) That’s actually Thunder Blade. Still you pulled that off with no casting time. Impressive. (Stands up while still holding the little girl and begins to return to the clearing.) Things would be so much easier if you and your cousin could just live here. Unfortunately you have a different destiny. What’s more, all I can think about when you’re here is the time when my wife and I used to babysit you before your father died. The time you spent playing with my son Lloyd. You don’t remember any of that though do you? (Picks up the wooden sword from the spot where Yuan left it as he enters the clearing)

5 Year Old Sara: (shakes her head before yawing) no.

Kratos: I figured you wouldn’t. The traumatic things you went through last year had to have blocked a lot of your happier memories. (Surrounds his hand with energy and sends that energy into the toy sword) I want you to keep this with you from now on. It may just be a toy but I’ve placed an enchantment on it. Or at least I tried to. I probably should have asked Yuan to do it. If you’re ever in danger that sword will protect you. (hands the wooden sword to the five year old Sara)

5 Year Old Sara: (nods taking the toy) Ok. (yawns)

Kratos: (draws his own sword and uses it to cut a rip in the barrier that separates his universe from Sara’s before returning it to its sheath.) It’s late in your world after I tuck you in I’m going to check on your cousin then return to my duties. (travels between dimensions)

5 Year Old Sara: (giggles)

Kratos: I meant business. What is it with children and that word? (Places the little girl into her bed) Now go to sleep.

5 Year old Sara: (Yawns while speaking) Good night Uncle Kratos.

Kratos leaves the room and Sara’s five year old self quickly falls asleep ending that part of her memory.

Sara finds herself as her current age standing in a completely white area. Unsure what to do next she begins willing her subconscious to take a human form. as a humanoid shape begins to form around her she expects it to take the form of Kratos, or maybe one of her other mentors like Alvin or Yuan. To her surprise it takes the form of the red haired boy who she had been seeing in Odd’s place earlier.

Sara: Not exactly what I was expecting.

???: So what are you going to do now?

Sara: I don’t know.

???: Why not rest and go through your other memories? That computer program probably didn’t do anything to them but better safe than sorry.

Sara: The longer I sleep the more bad things could happen.

???: You’re fine. You have people looking out for ya. Besides it’s been way too long you’ve had a good night sleep. You deserve a rest every once and a while ya know?

Sara: (Sighs) I guess You’re right. I’ve probably only been asleep for a few minutes. If the others are still looking after me I’m sure they won’t mind a little longer.

???: And you have to make sure that Xana dude didn’t mess with your mind more.

Sara: (Chuckels) Yeah Thanks’s Zelos

Zelos: You know I’m just a projection of your subconscious right.

Sara: Yes and why my emotional state produced you I will never know. (Sara focuses her mind and allows herself to begin dreaming)

Message par DragonGirl » 20 Aoû 2007, 20:19

So I couldn't think of a chapter title which tended to be a problem with my fanfics before they were rewritten too. If anyone has suggestions then post them in the comments and if I like the idea enough I'll edit the title in for the chapter is goes best with and give you credit for that title when I do so. (Credit for chapters titled by people other than myself will be posted at the top of the page somewhere between these little pre-chapter side comments I tend to make and the chapter's number and title)


Chapter 13 .....official chapter title pending


Aelita’s phone rings as soon as she and Sara arrive at the factory. Aelita turns her phone off after checking the caller ID. Sara gives Aelita a confused glance as they continue to the lab. Upon arriving at the lab Aelita sits down and puts on the headset. She rolls her eyes when she notices an already opened video chat window with Jeremy’s face in it.

Jeremy: Is everything alright Aelita? Why did you turn your phone off?

Aelita: I don’t want to talk to you right now.

Jeremy: We’re going to have to talk about this sometime. You made a potentially dangerous decision without discussing it with the rest of us.

Aelita: You mean without discussing it with you don’t you?

Sara: (Sighs) If no one needs anything from me then I’m going to find something to eat.

Aelita: (Turns to Sara) No I’m done talking to him. I’m really concerned about the way Xana’s been targeting you.

Sara: It’s not that big of a deal.

Jeremy: Wait what’s Xana doing.

Aelita: (glares back at Jeremy’s face on the screen) I don’t need you to make decisions.

The elevator door opens and Yumi steps out.

Yumi: Don’t pay any attention to what Ulrich said. He’s upset about everything lately and not thinking about what he’s saying.

Jeremy: (groans) I think I get what’s going on. Anyway what’s Xana been doing? I’m not sure how much help I can be from this end but I want to help.

Aelita: (sighs) Alright. (looks back at Sara) What was that dream you had last night.

Sara: (looks away) It’s nothing.

Aelita: We can’t help if you don’t tell us.

Sara: All that happened was your enemy tried to use memories of my mentors to turn me against all of you.

Jeremy: Have you been able to hear Xana at all when you’re awake?

Sara: (nods) Yeah I keep trying to block him out but nothing works.

Aelita: If it’s alright I’d like you to go to the scanners.

Sara: Why?

Aelita: I want to see if we can find a way to help you block Xana out but I need more data first.

Jeremy: I don’t see why you can’t just use your electrical powers to change the frequency your brain is tuned in to.

Sara: So Yumi told you but not everyone else.

Jeremy: I’ve known since you went to Lyoko the data was all there but I needed to be 100% sure before I told the others… Yumi when did you find out?

Yumi: A couple days ago. I caught her using her powers to light a campfire.

Aelita: I found out about her powers last night.

Jeremy: So Odd and Ulrich are the only ones still in the dark.

Sara: Hey is this conversation going anywhere or am I just going to stand here and listen to you guys talk for another couple hours? Cuz I’m getting hungry and I’m pretty sure breakfast isn’t going to catch it’s self.

Aelita: Yeah we’ll go get something to eat after I collect some data from the scanners.

Jeremy: Hey Aelita I think you should enjoy your vacation. Just send me the data once you’ve collected it and I’ll process it for you.

Aelita: You’re on vacation too.

Jeremy: Actually I’m still tweaking the prototype of the program to track Xana on the network. This would be a nice break from that.

Yumi: You sure you don’t want to spend time with your parents?

Jeremy: I have time to do both.

Sara goes to the scanner room and waits in one of the scanners. Once Aelita has the data she needs and has sent it to Jeremy the three girls make their way back to the hermitage.
When they arrive they find Odd and Ulrich waiting there for them with food ready. Yumi leaves once she manages to force Ulrich to apologize to Aelita. The four remaining teenagers eat in awkward silence with Ulrich glaring at Sara the entire time. Odd tries unsuccessfully to break the silence with a joke. Aelita eventually tries to start a conversation.

Aelita: So Sara what are your mentors like?

Sara: (looks down) I’m not sure. It’s been at least four years since the last time I’ve seen any of them probably longer. They may have changed… Or one of them might have died. I have no way of knowing. I can still remember the way they were when I was younger though.

Aelita: You don’t have to talk about it if you don’t want to.

Odd: So do your mentors have cool powers too?

Sara: Well one of them does. (Stands up and walks over to the window after a moment she holds her head)

Aelita: Are you alright.

Sara: I- I can’t seem to remember him clearly. He’s the one of my mentors I spent the most time with. I should be able to remember.

Aelita: Maybe Xana is blocking the memory.

Odd: You did say it had been years. Maybe you just forgot some stuff.

Ulrich: I can’t believe you two are actually buying this! (slams his fist down on the table) We can’t trust her! She’s one of Xana’s tricks!

Sara: (quietly leaves the hermitage)

Aelita: She’s doesn’t have anything to do with Xana. We have to give her a chance to win our trust.

Ulrich: And what if she’s just trying to earn our trust so she can kill us easier.

Odd: She’s had several chances to kill us. If that was her plan she would have tried something by now.

Ulrich: I don’t think we should trust her.

Aelita: We’ve already agreed to let her have a chance. Whether or not she joins us or we help her has to be a unanimous decision.

Ulrich: (Sighs) It better be.

Odd’s cell phone rings.

Sara wanders the woods holding her head.

Sara: (There’s nothing here that runs off electricity how can I still hear you!?)

Xana: They don’t trust you after all you’ve done for them.

Sara: (I’ve done nothing for them. Ugh how much farther do I have to go to get out of your range!)

Xana: You should join me. You’re not human. No human could possibly accept you-

Sara: (I already said no! I won’t join you! I will not be used by something that isn’t even alive! [Accidentally wanders off a cliff knocking herself out in the process])

When she wakes up Sara finds two boys standing over her. One boy has spiky brown hair and is wearing a red outfit. The other has very long bright red hair and is wearing clothing that make him look like a woman.

Red head: Hey are you ok?

Sara: Unngh. (Holds her head) What?

spiky head: You fell off a cliff.

Sara: (rubs her eyes) How hard did I have to bump my head for my eyes to go this wonky?

Red head: What do you mean?

Sara: (looks at the two boys) Who exactly are you guys? I’m pretty sure that what I’m seeing isn’t right.

Spiky head: I don’t have time to deal with this. (start to leave)

Red head: Hey Ulrich where are you going.

Ulrich: I’m going back to school. You better not stay out too late Odd. I’m not covering for you with Jim!

Sara: Yeah I’m definitely at least partially hallucinating.

Odd: Let’s get you back to the Hermitage. (helps Sara up) You probably shouldn’t go back to sleep

Sara: I’ll be fine. Thank you.

Xana: I’m no longer giving you a choice. I need your power. Since I can’t control you I’ll force you to join me.

Sara: (Ugh just shut up.)

Xana: Just give in. It will be easier for you. Scrambling your mind was just the start.

Message par DragonGirl » 20 Aoû 2007, 19:57

The audience dosn't appear to be verry active do they. (I miss 4kids at least the peolple there were active)

Ues but the people there ether insulted Code Lyoko or had no idea what it was (There were not manny code Lyoko fans on the 4kids tv messageboards) So shut up and be happy that people are reading at all!

I'm just saying that how are we sapposed to know what to do for between chapter entertainment if we don't know if the readers like what we're already doing? (How can she even tell that people are reading?)

There are more then 200 views if people didn't like the story and the between chapter entertainment there wouldn't be that manny views this soon especally since I'm still new here.

Yeah sure whatever.

We do have a problem though

Which is.

The secondary characters don't have any text colors to use for their turns for between chapter entertainment.

Except Jim.

Yes but that's not the point. I might as well list the text colors used and the secondaries can have what's left.

Odd is Indigo
Sara is Blue
Aelita is Violet (If it can even be called that it looks like pink)
Jeremy is brown
Yumi is Black (Her text color, her outfitm, and her hair)
Urlich is Oilve-Green
Xana is Dark Red
William is Red
Jhonny is Orange
Hiroki is Dark blue
Jim is Yellow
Melissa/Aubere(Her first name which she dose not go by in this story) is Cyan

That dosn't leave very much.

Of corse it dosn't! (Why dose my text color have to Look too similar to Xana's)

Thank you captain Obvious! :odd:

Shut up Odd!

All of you get off my account.

Except Odd

Sara You and Odd especally!

Awwwwwwww :pleur:

Not working!

Message par DragonGirl » 19 Aoû 2007, 22:24

DragonGirl a écrit:Salut! Jeremy and Aelita refused to take their turn for the Between Chaprer Entertainment So We got to Fill in last minute.

Shouldn't we be in class?

It's Sunday Jhonny there is no class.

Oh right.

For those who don't know I'm Hiroki and this is my firend Jhonny.

I think they know from when we interupted your sister's turn.

We still need to introduce our selves.

But you introduced both of us.

Shut up Jhonny.

BOTH OF YOU SHUT UP!

Who's the guy with the oversized soward?

I have no idea but he looks alot like a kid named William Dunbar.

SHUT UP YOU LITTLE BRATS!

I'm scaired. :pale:

Me too. :pale:

Don't you have anything better to do then pick on 5th graders?

No not really

Well why don't you pick on some only one a grade lower then you!

Fine I will!

LEAVE SARA ALONE!:odd2:

OW! DID YOU JUST HIT ME IN THE BACK OF THE HEAD WITH A SKATEBOARD?

And what if I did?

THEN I- HEY JIM LET GO OF MY EAR!

No. You know the rules no useing weapons on other students now I'm takeing you strate to the Principal's Office!

That was freaky?

Hey Hiroki where did your sister's friends go?

Probably wherever they are always sneaking off to.

Wow did they waste their turn all they did was talk and get attacked. anyone else think that was boring?

Message par DragonGirl » 19 Aoû 2007, 21:25

Salut! Jeremy and Aelita refused to take their turn for the Between Chaprer Entertainment So We got to Fill in last minute.

Shouldn't we be in class?

It's Sunday Jhonny there is no class.

Oh right.

For those who don't know I'm Hiroki and this is my firend Jhonny.

I think they know from when we interupted your sister's turn.

We still need to introduce our selves.

But you introduced both of us.

Shut up Jhonny.

BOTH OF YOU SHUT UP!

Who's the guy with the oversized soward?

I have no idea but he looks alot like a kid named William Dunbar.

SHUT UP YOU LITTLE BRATS!

I'm scaired. :pale:

Me too. :pale:

Don't you have anything better to do then pick on 5th graders?

No not really

Well why don't you pick on some only one a grade lower then you!

Fine I will!

LEAVE SARA ALONE! :odd2:

OW! DID YOU JUST HIT ME IN THE BACK OF THE HEAD WITH A SKATEBOARD?

And what if I did?

THEN I- HEY JIM LET GO OF MY EAR!

No. You know the rules no useing weapons on other students now I'm takeing you strate to the Principal's Office!

That was freaky?

Hey Hiroki where did your sister's friends go?

Probably wherever they are always sneaking off to.

Message par DragonGirl » 18 Aoû 2007, 20:37

Chapter 12 Nightmares and Illusions.



Sara lies on the couch downstairs staring at the ceiling. She looks over at the door then back at the ceiling.

Sara: (Man why now of all times did I have to get sucked into some strange Dimension. I mean it would have been one thing if I had ended up somewhere I’d been before like Sylvarant, or Elympious… then again those are just two planets in the same universe. Still I wouldn’t be stuck. I wonder what the people in that universe are doing right now...)

Sara’s thoughts drift off as she falls asleep.

Sara finds herself in a strangely dated yet somehow futuristic city. She wanders around and ends up riding a moving path into the middle of the forest. In the distance she can see a man with redish-brown hair and purple clothes standing in front of a stone slab. She hurries towards him.

Sara: Hey. What are you doing here? Shouldn’t you be spending time with your son? Or do you still have important work to do?

???: You shouldn’t be here.

Sara: What are you in the middle of something? Or are you waiting for someone?

???: No. You shouldn’t be here because you shouldn’t have existed in the first place.

Sara: Why would you say something like that? You’re my parallel if I shouldn’t exist then you certainly shouldn’t

???: My existence is irrelevant. (turns around and is wearing a set of armor that is white and a lighter shade of purple than his previous clothes.)

Sara: What the heck just happened to your clothes?

???*: Things that shouldn’t exist must be eradicated. (draws his sword)

Sara: (takes a step back) Are you insane? If you kill me you’ll die too.

????*: You think we actually care about something like that?

Sara: (turns around to see a man with dark brown hair a brown jacket and a long black scarf) Not you too. Wait what are you doing in Tethe’alla?

????*: Why should that matter? (rests his sword on his shoulder and points a gun at Sara’s head) I’m not someone you should trust.

Sara: What’s wrong with both of you? Snap out of it already?

???*: Everyone you trust will eventually turn their back on you. You would do well to remember that.

Sara: Wait… this isn’t real. Alvin wouldn’t be on this planet. And neither of you would try to kill me.

???*: The people you’re helping are nothing but liars. They will use you for your power then destroy you. Why not destroy them before they get the chance?

Sara: So that’s it. I though getting away from the city’s power grid would prevent you from talking to me. I didn’t expect you to manipulate my dreams.

???*: Join with me and I’ll send you wherever you want to go.

Sara: Like I said before no deal. I’m going to have to do a better job of blocking you out from now on. I will not be manipulated.

???*: What do you think those pathetic humans are doing to you now? They are lying to you so that you’ll side with them.

Sara: Another thing. I’m not letting you mess with my head anymore.

Alvin: Come on now? You can’t keep resisting? Just join us.

Sara: Can it Alvin I’m talking to an Illusionary version of Kratos right now. Go play with Jude or something.

Kratos*: You really think those Humans are capable of helping you? They have no power.

Sara: Then why are you so threatened by them Xana?

Kratos*: Those humans are no threat to me.

Sara: You’re threatened enough by them to impersonate my mentors. I’m done listening to you. Talk all you want I won’t listen. I won’t side with you. I’ve decided I’m going to kill you myself just to make you shut up.

Kratos*: Arrogant words from an arrogant human.

Sara: Pft. Just get out of my head already.

Aelita: Are you alright?

Sara: (Looks around and notices that the scene has changed and she’s now in the factory)

Aelita: Wake up.

Sara: Yes. I should wake up. (sits up and opens her eyes upon looking around she's back on the couch in the Hermitage.) Ungh. That was annoying.

Aelita: I’m sorry.

Sara: (looks at Aelita) No not you. The dream I was having… Thanks for waking me up.

Aeltia: You must be a light sleeper.

Sara: Yeah I usually have to be. It’s rare that I get a good night sleep.

Aelita: That doesn't sound good.

Sara: Well that’s how it is for me. I’m used to it. Say. I wasn't talking in my sleep at all was I? I mean I've never done that before but this is sort of a different situation then I’m used to.

Aelita: No. Why what was your dream about?

Sara: Your enemy is trying to invade my brain. I don’t care if you want to help me with my situation at this point. I just want that thing dead.

Ulrich: (Crosses his arms as he enters the room) What are you doing here?

Aelita: I brought her here.

Ulrich: Why would you do that?

Aelita: I decided I didn't want to be alone.

Odd: You should have called us. We would have come.

Aelita: (Looks away) I couldn't not after I told you all I’d be fine.

Ulrich: Did you at least talk this through with Jeremy first?

Aelita: (Face turns bright red) I DON’T NEED HIS PERMISSION TO MAKE DECISIONS!

Sara: Sounds like me being here is just making things worse.

Aelita: Not at all.
Ulrich: You got that right!

Odd: (looks around) So. Who’s hungry?

Ulrich: Why are food and girls the only things you think about?

Odd: I think about other stuff.

Sara: (Sighs)

Aelita: (Looks back at Sara) I think we should go to the factory. I want to know what Xana wants with you.

Sara: (Shrugs then nods) It’s not like I have anything better to do.

Aelita: (Takes Sara’s hand) Odd please keep Ulrich’s attitude under control. (Leaves the hermitage dragging Sara with her)

Ulrich: (pulls out his cell phone)

Odd: Give them a few minutes before you call Jeremy alright.

Ulrich: No chance.

Odd: You already crossed one line don’t make things worse. With Yumi and Jeremy both gone I have to play peace keeper and I really don’t like this job.

Ulrich: (grunts then begins dialing his phone ignoring Odd)

Message par DragonGirl » 17 Aoû 2007, 22:31

Chapter 11 Bonding Part 3: Aelita


The Lyoko warriors stand infront of the hermitage. Aelita takes her suitcase from Jeremy’s hand.

Aelita: You should get back before your dad arrives to pick you up.

Jeremy: Yeah I guess so. You’re sure you’ll be okay by yourself? (pushes his glasses up his nose)

Aelita: (nods)

Odd: Relax Einstein. Ulrich and I will come back and check on her tonight.

Yumi: And I don’t leave until tomorrow afternoon.

Aelita: If I need anything I’ll call. (Turns and walks towards the house) Go have fun All of You. I’ll see you later.

Jeremy: (Sighs) Alright. I’ll call you tonight ok?

Aelita: (laughs) Just don’t forget. (enters the house and closes the door behind her)

Jeremy: (sighs again) I guess we should get going.

Yumi: You’re still worried?

Jeremy: Of course I am.

After night fall Odd and Ulrich leave after their second visit of the day. Aelita sighs and goes up stairs to her childhood bedroom and lies down on the bed. She tries to fall asleep. After an hour she pulls out a book and a flashlight and tries to read but with no luck. After another hour she stands up and walks to change her clothes.

Sara leans against a support beam next to the elevator next to a small campfire. She eventually lies down occasionally looking up at the security camera. After a while she rolls over so her back is to the camera and covers her ears.
Aelita slides down the rope and walks over to Sara.

Aelita: Are you okay?

Sara: (presses her hands harder against her ears) Ungghhh.

Aelita: Hey. (kneels down next to Sara) Does your head hurt or something? (reaches out to touch Sara’s shoulder.)

Sara: Ahhhhg! (Jumps up and shoves Aelita across the room)

Aelita: W-what was that for?

Sara: (looks around confused) Hua? S-sorry. You scared me.

Aelita: (sighs as she stands up) Are you ok. It looked like you were having a nightmare.

Sara: …. I’m not so sure if that’s it. It’s this place.

Aelita: (Raises an eyebrow) Too many strange noises?

Sara: Sort of. (points up at the camera) That thing keeps releasing this strange electronic humming noise. It’s hard to hear but there’s something about it that’s really upsetting.

Aelita: (looks up at the camera) I think I have a solution. (takes Sara’s hand) Come with me. I know a better place for you to sleep.

Sara follows Aelita back to the hermitage. When the two girls walk through the front door Sara is confused.

Aelita: You can just sit anywhere you feel comfortable.

Sara: Um… What is this place?

Aelita: I know it’s s horrible mess in here. We’ve been meaning to clean up but between school and trying to destroy Xana we keep forgetting.

Sara: I see. Still you didn’t answer my question?

Aelita: This was my home when I was little.

Sara: I’m guessing your family still owns it.

Aeltia: Yes. Though I’m not entirely sure how there’s still running water in this place.

Sara: It seems this place isn’t on the city’s power grid.

Aelita: It has its own generator. How did you know that.

Sara: I have power over electricity.

Aelita: Why didn’t you say something sooner?

Sara: Well your enemy is electricity based. I knew it would scare everyone. You’re already suspicious of me… I did tell Yumi after she saw me cook a fish with my powers. But I swear I only use my power over electricity for self preservation purposes.

Aelita: It’s fine. If you were working with Xana you would have killed me by now.

Sara: That is solid logic. A bit simple though. You never know what your enemy is planning. Even when you think you know you don’t know exactly what the enemy is thinking. I mean seriously. I want you all to trust me because I need your help but I’m a little concerned. You shouldn’t be this trusting this soon.

Aelita: I suppose you’re right.

Sara: I’m serious about this. I’ve been to many other universes. I’ve had several mentors in those dimensions. I’ve been warned by all of them to never immediately trust anyone.

Aelita: That makes sense for your situation.

Sara: It makes sense for yours too.

Aelita: Well we should get some sleep.

Sara: Yeah. hey um. Aelita.

Aelita: Yes.

Sara: Thanks.

Aelita: No problem.

Message par DragonGirl » 16 Aoû 2007, 23:59

Chapter 10 Vacation Plans



Ulrich stands guard as Jeremy plugs Sara’s Pokegear into the school’s antenna. He rolls his eyes when he hears Jeremy say “almost got it.” for the eighth time.

Ulrich: Just give up already. You aren’t going to get it to work.

Jeremy: It has to work. This is the only thing I haven’t tired.

Ulrich: Why are do you want to help this girl anyway? She’s crazy.

Jeremy: I don’t want to help her. That’s a decision we all have to make together. Once we know all the facts that is.

Ulrich: We should just stay away from her. She’s obviously some government science experiment.

Jeremy: No the data from the scanners confirmed that she’s not from this universe. I still don’t buy that Xana doesn’t have some hand in all of this. Whether or not she’s another one of his traps is another matter entirely.

Ulrich: So what are we going to do about her over vacation? We can’t just leave her at the factory un-attended for three weeks. It’s bad enough that we’re doing that now.

Jeremy: I know but we don’t really have a choice. Besides We have a bigger problem relating to vacation than that girl… Ok that should do it. (Unplugs Sara’s Pokegear from the antenna.) Maybe now I’ll be able to extract some data.

Ulrich: Perfect timing I hear Jim talking to someone in the stairwell.

Jeremy: What the heck is Odd doing? He was supposed to keep Jim away from the science building. (makes sure the antenna is exactly the same as when they arrived)

Ulrich: I told you we should have asked Yumi to do it.

???: Hey Jim I saw some sixth graders hanging out by the garden shed.

Jim: And why should I care about that? I have more important things to worry about Dunbar.

Jeremy: (looks over the edge of the building towards the garden shed) There’s no one there.

William: Because they were playing with some tools.

Jim: This isn’t some trick to keep me from going to the roof is it? Della Robbia already pulled a similar stunt earlier.

William: One of them had a nail gun. Would I lie about something that dangerous?

Jim: WHY DIDN’T YOU COME FIND ME SOONER!

Ulrich: (Rolls his eyes)

William: I told Mr. Caggia but he didn’t believe me.

Jim: Well You did the right thing Telling me Dunbar. Next time come to me first.

Jeremy: That was convenient.

Ulrich: Let’s just go. (Peeks into the stairwell to make sure Jim is gone and sees William leaning against the wall below)

William: (looks up at Ulrich and smirks) You’re welcome.

Ulrich: (rolls his eyes and ignores William as he walks downstairs.) Hey Jeremy hurry up and come on already. Odd and Aelita are waiting for us.

Jeremy: (Follows Ulrich down the stairs briefly stopping in front of William) Thanks.

Ulrich: Don’t thank him we didn’t need his help!

Almost an hour later in the cafeteria Jeremy, Aelita, Odd and Ulrich sit at a table eating their lunch. Ulrich lets out a sigh of relief when William sits down at a table nearby but not directly with them.
Yumi grabs a chair from the table where William is sitting and pulls it over so that she can sit between Jeremy and Aelita.

Yumi: So how did it go?

Jeremy: Yeah I got it working and finally got the data off it but it’s going to take a while before I get any results back.

Ulrich: So all that for nothing. Can you just give up on this? You’re not going to find out anything new.

Jeremy: Still it will give me something to do over vacation besides worrying about…. You know what. Which reminds me. What are we going to do this time? Aelita Can’t just keep staying here over vacation. People will start to ask questions that we don’t want them asking.

Odd: You’re over thinking this.

Jeremy: Eventually someone is going to ask why she never goes back to Canada. She can’t stay with Yumi because she’s going out of town with her family.

Yumi: What about the Hermatage?

Jeremy: Who’s going to stay there with her hua? She can’t just stay there alone that’s a Xana induced Disaster waiting to happen.

Aelita: (Scarcastic tone) You know I really love it when you guys start talking about me as if I wasn’t sitting right next to you.

Yumi: Sorry Aelita.

Aelita: It’s alright Yumi. (glares at Jeremy)

Jeremy: I’m sorry too. I should have just asked what you wanted to do.

Aelita: I think we should use Yumi’s idea.

Jeremy: Are you sure about this Aelita.

Aelita: It’s either that or staying on Lyoko for three weeks.

Jeremy: (sighs) You’re right.

Aelita: Besides Odd and Ulrich are staying here over vacation. They can come check up on me.

Odd: Provided we can sneak past Jim.

Ulrich: (chuckles) You better hope he didn’t hear that Odd.

Jeremy: I still don’t like it but… It’s better than the alternative. I’ll see about talking to my parents about you coming to stay with us over the next vacation.

Aelita: I’d like that. Why didn’t you think of doing that this time?

Jeremy: (Blushes.) That was the plan originally but there was a glitch that prevented the plan from working.

Ulrich: Can we not talk about this right now? (points between Yumi and Aelita at William shaking his head as he eavesdrops on their conversation)
Jeremy: (picks up his tray and stands up) I’d be more worried about Sissy if I were you Ulrich.

Ulrich: Great with William listening in I completely forgot about her.

Jeremy: So Since I got this thing fixed. I might as well go give it back to what was her name again? Sara I think?

Odd: (grabs his tray and stands up) I’ll come with you.

Jeremy: (Rolls his eyes) Of course you will.

Aelita: (picks up her tray and stands up as well) I’ll come too.

Jeremy: Oh thank goodness.

Once Jeremy, Aelita and Odd leave Ulrich and Yumi are left alone. Both of them eat in awkward silence. Ulrich blushes the entire time and tries his best to keep Yumi from noticing.

Ulrich: (Ok so…I’m alone. With Yumi…. this never happens. I wonder how much longer this will last.)

Yumi: (Jeeze Ulrich the least You could do is say something. I should have gone with the others.)

Suddenly William Grabs his tray and moves over to where Jeremy had been sitting. Sissy, Nicolas, and Herve all stand up and change their seats at the same time as well. Sissy moving to where Odd had been sitting. And Nicolas and Herve raceing to see who got Aelita’s seat. Nicolas is a bit faster leaving Herve to return to his original seat.

Ulrich: (Of course that would have to happen. Just my luck. )

Yumi: (That really just happened?)

Message par DragonGirl » 15 Aoû 2007, 23:40

Edit: Just a reminder that the between chapter randomness is not being changed and is out of context with the current version of the story.

Well It's our turn to entertain you reading people. :ulrich:

But unlike Sara and Odd we aren't goting to bother DragonGirl to do so. :yumi:

(Good)

Instead we'll be pointing out everything that makes them look like they should be twins

If you dare-

You can't stop us your turn is over.

Unfortualtly their right but as long as the readers know that we really aren't even related what so ever I can deal with it

(I doubt that the readers will care wether the 2 of you are related by the end of the sequal)

Shut up DragonGirl!

(Make me! And get on with it! Sara and Odd can watch but not talk)

The first thing is their outfits on Lyoko the first ones since the story your reading was actually written around the time of season 2 not season 4.

(I already explained that)

Well you'll notice that there only a few differences like color and that Odd's has a picture of his dog and Sara's has that gold triangle thing.

That "triangle thing" is called the Triforce!!!

It dosn't look like thay care.

Get out of here Hiroki!

He isn't even in this story!

Yeah well I should be

(You can keep thinking that but I'm not changeing it)

Well the second thing is that they both have blond hair well except Odd Has tha Purple spot but still without that they would look exactally like twins

I think that's it

No their personalitys are almost exactally the same

and that's all? They didn't seem related to me?

Jhonny Are you comming or what?

I think I'm going to hang out here for a while

(Both if you 5th graiders get out of here now!)

Is she always like that?

Yep

It's really annoying

You realize she heard you right?

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