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Message 18 Déc 2012, 00:35

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

Americains doesn't have fansubbers for Code Lyoko ?
If it's true, maybe we can make something for help you. But, if you had fansubbers, they is probably better than us. ^^ (particulary than me)
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Message 18 Déc 2012, 06:46

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

most american fansubbers don't pay attention to code lyoko. they focus more on Japanese anime. there is a good chance that someone will make a fandubed version in about a year or longer and in a few years we may get a fansubbed version. though that's with going off seasons 1-4 of codelyoko. it may be diffrent with evolution
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Message 18 Déc 2012, 11:10

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

Maybe can I copy french text, and translate it with google translate. So, someone can rewrite sentences in good english, and after, I will insert subtitles in videos. Do someone want do it with me ? (:

Ps : we are out of topic ^^

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Message 18 Déc 2012, 22:19

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

Typy a écrit:Maybe can I copy french text

Good idea.

Typy a écrit:and translate it with google translate.

Bad idea. Automatic translations are awful :pale:

Typy a écrit:I will insert subtitles in videos.

Do you know how to do such a thing? Also, obviously, having the video file would be necessary.

Typy a écrit:Do someone want do it with me ?

I may help translate if needed. I'm sure Sonic could do it too, he has good skills in English.

Typy a écrit:Ps : we are out of topic

That's right ;) Posts should be moved to the topic "Code Lyoko Evolution".

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Message 20 Déc 2012, 00:05

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

Allright, I got the video file of the episode. Typy, if you're still motivated, you can write down the French lines and I'll start translating when I have some time.
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Message 20 Déc 2012, 21:38

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

You are so kind (:
Sonic is volunteer to translate too (thanks to your compliments!). Because you (you and Sonic) don't have much time, you can share the work. (:

Ok, I copy french text this evening ^^

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Message 22 Déc 2012, 12:40

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

Looks like some people were faster than us, subtitles are already available!
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Message 29 Déc 2012, 18:10

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

DragonGirl a écrit:You're still doing good but it's beginning to get confusing. ( a little confusing isn't always bad just be careful)


Yeah I re-read it and it was kinda confusing.
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Message 29 Déc 2012, 18:28

Chapter 14:..... Can't think of a title that makes sense

Brandon: I can't go back in time to change it cause that would cause a time paradox......Can't ask anyone, cause they would find out about my magic/ wouldn't believe me.Would ask Westin, but I don't even know where the heck he is...Aha!(Snaps his fingers) Why do people always snap their fingers when they get ideas?

Westin: Are you talking to yourself?

Brandon: (Has Been Standing the whole time) What The?!!(Sweep kicks Westin)Oops!!Sorry!!

Westin: Oww!!Whatever, class is starting.(Gets up and walks away)

Brandon: Anyway...(Teleports someone with silver hair, dog ears, a dog nose, and sharp teeth to him)H-

???: Brandon?!What the heck?Why did you bri-

Brandon: I need your help.I need you to -

???: No Way!!!I ain't helping you!!!

Brandon: Sit.

???: (Falls straight on his face)Why you-Only Kagome is supposed to be able to do that!!

Brandon: SUCKS TO SUCK!!!Anyway, can you go through that stupid bone-eaters well for me?

???: Why?

Brandon: Because I said to Inuyasha!!!

Inuyasha: Your worse than Miroku...

Brandon: :angryfire: What was that?

Inuyasha: Nothing!!
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Message 30 Déc 2012, 05:47

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

You're still doing good so far but I recommend you be careful with your use of time travel.
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Message 30 Déc 2012, 20:56

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

DragonGirl a écrit:You're still doing good so far but I recommend you be careful with your use of time travel.


Do you mean stop using it so much?
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Message 01 Jan 2013, 03:15

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

sixthwarrior a écrit:
DragonGirl a écrit:You're still doing good so far but I recommend you be careful with your use of time travel.


Do you mean stop using it so much?


That's not exactly what i meant. I meant to be careful. Time travel can make things confusing really fast. If you take your time, make sure everything matches up and be careful with how you word things you'll be fine.
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Message 01 Jan 2013, 17:54

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

DragonGirl a écrit:
sixthwarrior a écrit:
DragonGirl a écrit:You're still doing good so far but I recommend you be careful with your use of time travel.


Do you mean stop using it so much?


That's not exactly what i meant. I meant to be careful. Time travel can make things confusing really fast. If you take your time, make sure everything matches up and be careful with how you word things you'll be fine.


Ok.I'm starting to have to many characters from different shows so I'm going to get rid of some.Here is the list:

Inuyasha: Definitely getting rid of.(He was a one time thing)

Sakura: Have to keep.(You'll understand in my next story)Well might not keep but just switch parts with someone.

Korra: Same as Sakura.

Westin: Have to keep no matter what.(Oh and he's not from a show he's my actual friend)

Alan Meyer: I know that he's an important plot in the show and my story but he is gonna stay low for awhile until the show airs here because, well I have no pretty much no info about him yet.
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Message 01 Jan 2013, 17:58

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

Happy New Years Everyone!
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Message 13 Jan 2013, 23:49

Sorry, no chapters until about after February.I have to study for a spelling bee thing, and I have to get started on my science fair project(Both due in February.).
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Message 09 Mar 2013, 20:27

Chapter 15:....Still can't think of a title

Okay,first,I'm really sorry about not posting anything.Now I'm going to try to make more chapters starting now but it's getting hard to make ideas.and if I can't think of ideas I'll post previews of what I've been thinking.This and the next chapter are being back to back.(about 20 minutes after this post I'll post the next chapter)

Inuyasha: So you want me to fix the past?

Brandon: Yup.Here is a earpiece so I can tell you what to do.

Inuyasha: Ughhh!Fine!

Brandon: [I just thought of something.I could just launch a return to the past back to when I met all of them.]

Inuyasha: Okay...(Runs into a portal to the past)

Brandon: No!!WAIT!!![Oh no...]

To be continued....
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Message 09 Mar 2013, 21:18

Chapter 16:....Anyone, anyone got a title?

Continuing from the last chapter:

Brandon: WAIT!!!![Oh no...]

Inuyasha: What?

Brandon: Um, we have a problem.

Inuyasha: Which is?

Brandon: You..*gulp*..Didn't...Have to go to the past...

Inuyasha: What?!

Brandon: I was gonna launch a Return To The Past, but that would be dangerous if your in the past.

Inuyasha: I could just find the bone eaters well.

Brandon: Okay.

*Sometime later*

Inuyasha: Found it!

Brandon: okay.

*In the factory*

Brandon: Return to the past now.(goes back to when meeting naruto and Sakura)

Brandon: Any minute now...

William: There he is.

Brandon: Aha!(turns around and attacks William)

William: Owww...(disappears)

Brandon: (goes to meet them)
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Message 10 Mar 2013, 21:17

Chapter 17 Part 1: The End

This is part one of the last chapter.

Brandon: (Finishes meeting everyone) Phew...Now I just need to get back to my own time.I can create a portal.

...What?I never said he couldn't make a portal for himself, did I?(rhetorical)

Brandon:(goes back to own time)(phone rings)Hello?...Yes, this is Brandon...ODD DID WHAT?!THAT IDIOT IS DEAD!!!WHERE IS HE?!...mmhmm...Okay.Bye.I can't believe Odd...(phone rings again)Hello?mmhmmm...What song?Why should I?Ugh shut up idiot!(hangs up)Stupid...

About an Hour later in Brandon and Westin's Room.

Brandon: (looks up the song)Owwww!!!!This is torture!!!(falls out of his chair in his room)OWWWW!!!!!(Gets up and turns off song)

Westin: (Walks in the dorm)Hmm?Why do you look ticked off?

Brandon: It's nothing...

One hour later next to the cafeteria:

Brandon: (sees odd)HEY!!!

Odd: Hmm?

Brandon: Why would you go through MY PERSONAL STUFF!!!

Odd: How did you find ou-

Brandon: Jeremie.

Odd: He so owes me...

Brandon: And YOU owe ME!!!

Odd: What do you want?

Brandon: What do I want?What I want Is MY JOURNAL BACK!!!

Odd: Okay.(hands over journal)

Brandon: (takes it and leaves)

One day later.

In Brandon and Westin's room:

Brandon: (looks at phone)Hmm?A new text.

Brandon: Hmm?"Go to Sector 5 or Westin dies. XANA"

Brandon: Oh no...

Dun Dun Dun!!!!
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Message 11 Mar 2013, 03:42

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

Really?Nothing?Don't leave me hanging guys!I have to get a reaction before I post the last chapter!
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Message 11 Mar 2013, 22:41

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

one word narration can be confusing for the reader. Next time make sure to tell the reader how much later and the location. Other than that you're doing good
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Message 12 Mar 2013, 00:02

Re: My version of Code: Lyoko

DragonGirl a écrit:one word narration can be confusing for the reader. Next time make sure to tell the reader how much later and the location. Other than that you're doing good


Okay, I'll edit that right away!
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Message 12 Mar 2013, 00:18

Okay, before anyone might get confused, Jeremie did NOT tell him to look up that song.Brandon's other friend from his other school called and told him.
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Message 13 Mar 2013, 04:08

Countdown!!!

Countdown!!!On March 13, 2013, at 12:00 Noon, I will post the Final Chapter!I'm Happy and Sad.

I'm happy because:

I finished my first Code Lyoko Story!

I got to show people my one of my talents.

I've officially started my own series of books on this website!

I've gotten help by many people, both in constructive criticism, and being nice when using it.

I'm sad because:

My story is ending.

It wasn't that long.(Trust me guys, the next one will be about 2x bigger!)

After I post the final chapter, I will post a preview of my next book.(Yes, I've been working on it since, like, chapter 7!)
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Message 13 Mar 2013, 19:04

Chapter 17 Part 2: The End

Continuing off of the last chapter:

Brandon: That's why I haven't seen Westin in a while.X.A.N.A kidnapped him!But where would he take him?[I need to figure this out fast.]

20 Minutes Later.

Brandon: (Walks up to Jeremie)Hey, Jeremie, can I ask you something?

Jeremie: Yeah, what is it?

Brandon: If X.A.N.A were to kidnap someone, do you know where he would probably take them?[If he says Lyoko I'm going to be in trouble.]

Jeremie: Well, Not Lyoko.He would, although, hide them somewhere in the Factory.

Brandon: Okay.Bye![I'm off to the factory!]

Jeremie: Why did you want to know?

Brandon: Umm...ummm...[DISTRACTION!!!I NEED A DISTRACTION!!!]Umm...Hey!!!A double rainbow!!!(points to the sky)

Jeremie: Where?!(Looks to where Brandon is pointing)

Brandon: (Runs Away)

Jeremie: (Turns to where Brandon was)Oh, wow.I can't believe I was stupid enough to fall for that.

At the factory.

Brandon: (Looking in all the rooms{Even the non important ones from some episodes})Secret Spot...Secret Spot...Aha!(Finds a secret door and goes through it)Ugghhhh, He's not in here!I guess X.A.N.A's smarter than I thought.Hey!Another door!(goes through it)Westin?!Is that you?!

Westin: (His mouth is taped shut)MMMMM!!!!!MMM MMM MMMM MMMMMMMM!!!!!

Brandon: (Takes the tape off)I'm so glad you're okay!!!

Westin: Barely...The guy...shocked me really bad....oww...

Brandon: I've got to get you out of here!

Brandon + Westin: (Hear Footsteps)What?!

Brandon: (Whispering)Now I REALLY have to get you out of here!

Westin: I can barely walk!

Brandon: Shh!!Keep your voice down.I've got a distraction!(Says something and Westin turns invisible)

Westin: Wow!!!I forgot you have powers!

Brandon: I'll hide you in some other spot.(Moves Westin)I'm gonna go distract him.(Makes himself invisible and leaves)

Brandon goes to the computer room.

Brandon: Delayed Virtualisation!(goes to the scanner room)

On Lyoko.

Brandon: There has to be an activated tower.(looks around and sees it)Okay, I see it.(His vehicle {Completely Blue Mantas} Appears and he gets on it)Uh-Oh!Tarantulas!(The tarantulas shoot his mantas and he falls)AHHHHH!!!(Hits the ground)Owww!!!Must have lost like 30 life points!(Sees William)Oh no.

William: (starts running towards Brandon)You're dead!

Brandon: Not today!!(Makes a shield around himself)Ha!Can't get me now!

William: Can't I?(Breaks the Shield with his sword)

Brandon: I'm toast...

Back over on Westin's side.

Westin: [I have to be completely silent!]

Specter: (Comes in the room)He better be on Lyoko...

Westin: [What's Lyoko?]

Specter: Hey!Where's the kid?!

Back on Lyoko.

Brandon: I won't be able to protect myself from you AND THAT!!!(Points to the scyphozoa)Oh yeah.You can't attack me because if I get devirtualised I can't go to Sector 5, now can I?

William: Fine!

Brandon: So you'll let me deactivate the tower?

William: mmm....I guess.

Brandon: (runs in the tower, deactivates it, and comes out) Bye-Bye!(summons a sword and stabs himself)

William: NOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Back in the factory.

Brandon: (gets to the computer room)Return to the Past Now.

Goes back to when Brandon was about to get the text.

Brandon: Let's hope it worked...

Westin: (Walks through the door)Hey Brandon!

Brandon: Westin!

Westin: Yeah?

Brandon: Ummm...Do you wanna go to the movies?

Westin: Sure!

The End.
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Message 13 Mar 2013, 19:54

Preview: Code Lyoko: Under X.A.N.A's Control

Here is the preview of my next book:

Coming Soon...

Code Lyoko: Under X.A.N.A's Control

When Brandon is forced to work for X.A.N.A, will it be game over for Team Lyoko?Will X.A.N.A delete Lyoko with him?Will X.A.N.A have a new Permanant slave?Will Westin find out about Lyoko? Will I ever stop asking questions?Find out in Code Lyoko: Under X.A.N.A's Control!

Trailer

Brandon: Fine...I'll...Be your slave, X.A.N.A.

X.A.N.A: Very good William.You have gotten the boy to join us.
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Aelita: Brandon!What are you doing?!!You can't destroy the core!!!

Sakura: BRANDON!STOP!!!
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Westin: What's a Loko?

Ulrich: It's Lyoko.
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Jeremie: Why did you tell him?!

Yumi: We're going to need all the backup we can get to save Brandon from X.A.N.A!
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William: Why did you stop?DESTROY THE CORE NOW OR DIE!

Brandon: Why should I?Hyyyahhhhh!!!(Throws a shuriken at William but it misses)

William: X.A.N.A knew you would betray us.(Throws sword at core)

Jeremie: Be careful!X.A.N.A shut the scanners off somehow!

Sakura:NO!THE CORE!(Jumps in front of the core and get's hit by William's sword)

Brandon:SAKURA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Is it the end of Lyoko?Is Sakura dead?Find out in:

Code Lyoko: Under X.A.N.A's Control
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