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berrren106

MessagePosté: 18 Nov 2013, 13:14
par berrren106
CodeLyoko:Aelita's brother?part1 (the bell rings)BZZZZZZ″Come on guys!Its time for class!″said Odd.″Hey, were coming!!Why are you so exited for class all of a sudden?″said Ulrich.″I know right,being exited for class is my thing!!!″said Jeremie.″Come on in class!Take your seat and ill pass a test out.″said Mrs.Hertz.TO BE CONTINUED

Re: berrren106

MessagePosté: 19 Déc 2013, 00:20
par evolutionary
Your fiction is very short

Re: berrren106

MessagePosté: 19 Déc 2013, 13:01
par Jules
It's a fiction ?! :shock:

It's really too short. :?

MessagePosté: 21 Déc 2013, 17:19
par sixthwarrior
Well of course it's short, it said To be continued